[Denied][Elf] Shayne789

[Shayne789 12]

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

Make sure you post your application on the Lord of the Craft Minecraft Forums thread as well as our forums here.

 

I love the fact that you have implemented a lot of server lore into your character's life. This is something many people forget to do. However, I would like you to add more detail to the biography. You have the right idea I'd just like you to expand on it some.

 

Try to add more detail to your character's personality and skills as well. Fleshing out your character will prove helpful when you do begin roleplaying on the server.

 

Expand on your first and second ORQs. Try to add more dialogue and detail throughout your answers.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

 

[cruzazul 2815]

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