[Denied]Kumez Pargon Charcter Application Questions

[Kumez 6]

Out-Of-Character Information
The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: theveryrandomG
How old are you?: 15
What time-zone do you live in?: Canada

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: Yes, I have a roleplaying server that me and my sister play on. Very simmilar to the kind of R.p in Lord of The Craft.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: No

How did you hear about us?: I looked up "roleplaying servers"
What do you think the server will be like? Very awesome, and fun.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have.
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: well... the on that talks about where you can build, and hoe it has to match the enviorment that it is in.


Definitions
This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not Google’s.

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is where 2 or more people (or players) take on the role of a made-up, or fictonal charcter.
What’s metagaming?: To tell you the truth, i'm not sure.
What’s powergaming?: Powergaming is a way of letting the player have more freedom than bormal when playing, or creating a charcter (I think)

In-Character Information:
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: His name is Kumez Pargon (Same as my username)
What race are they (and sub-race)?: Dwarf, a forest dwarf.
What sex are they?: Male
How old are they?: 24
Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: Kumez's childhood was rough. He grew up in Mount Ire, until he and his familiy were forced to flee the nation after his parents were framed for murde of a member of the high council. When they realized that no matter how far they ran, the people of Mount Ire would still find them, his parents made the tough decision to leave Kumez and his sister Teall with thier grandparents in the city of Kal'Alras, and face the people of Ire. They were convicted of murder, AND treason, and put to death. Kumez has vowed since his childhood to find revenge.
What are they like (personality)?: Quiet, but dedicated and resouceful.
What are their ambitions?: To take revenge, study druidism (after his revenge), and study the history of the world he lives in.
Do they have any special skills?: Climbing, memory, and sneaking.
What are their weaknesses?: the undead and potatoes. (Don't ask, it's a long story)
What do they look like?: Kumez is bald with hair on the sides and back of his head, he has blue eyes and a shoort-ish beard.
Anything else you want to say about them?: Nothing much. Just that I hope he will work in the world of Anthos.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: It is attached to this application.

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[Nug 2011]

This is a decent application but could use some work in a few areas:

 

~ You did not include a metagaming definition, your powergaming definition is incorrect, and your roleplaying definition could be elaborated upon.

 

~ Your skin could use a bit of editing, it doesn't look too much like a Forest Dwarf.

 

~ Your past history is a bit cliche, I suggest changing it.

 

~ You should actually fill out your weaknesses instead of putting silly answers like potatoes and the Undead.

 

~ You did not post on the Minecraft Forums, you can post on it here.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours and if you have any questions, feel free to PM me.

[Nug 2011]

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