[Denied][Pending]4Th Application- Adgclark14

[Adgclark14 0]

Whitelist Application: Lord of the Craft

 

            Out-of-Character Information:

 

Minecraft Username: Adgclark14

 

Age: 14

 

Time-Zone: Mountain Time

 

Have you ever Role-played before: Yes I have,
through all kinds of different computer MMOs. And I also have played other
Minecraft MMOs, like Desiredcraft and Lichcraft

 

Have I applied before: Only 3 times, with the
same character. (Fourth times a charm)

 

How did I hear about Lord of the Craft: My
friend, Jordan AKA. Raxxtus

 

What do you think the server will be like: From
the things I have heard from Raxxtus, they seem pretty amazing

 

Read and Agreed to the Rules: Yes I have read
and will abide by the rules

 

Favorite Rule: I think my favorite rule is no
villainous actions

 

Definitions:

 

Role-playing: Role-playing is acting as
character and developing them to fit the role they want

 

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is out-of-character
actions that insult actual people using their roleplay character as cover.

 

Power-gaming: Power-gaming is forcing an action on another player without their consent.

 

            In-Character Information:

 

Character Name: Quentin Lazara Forest

 

What Race/Sub-race: Elf, Wood Elf

 

Sex: Male

 

Age: 50

 

Brief Description of their life: Quentin Lazara
Forest, was born a very unusual child, born in the Holy Princedom of Malinor, a
city hidden from most. The moment he opened his eyes he had a fighting spirit. His
family consisted of his mother, father, and an older brother. His family was
small but not uncommon among the elves. Quentin always looked up to his older
brother because he was always the best archer and scholar. His brother was a
scout in the army, and a very skilled one at that. His brother’s name was Lance
White Forest. Lance had always been a skilled person, and he also taught
Quentin the ways of Diplomacy and War Strategies. His mother had always been
caring of him especially after birth. His mother and him had always shared a
special bond, she taught him things his people could never have told him. His
father was always a secretive man, even though after work he always seemed to
be on an edgy mood, which Quentin thought was weird but never said anything. Quentin
was always the smartest one in his learning, but he had flaws, he wasn’t the
classiest and the greatest speaker, so he didn’t have many friends, but he
always had no problem with that. At age 25, Quentin had decided to leave his
home and go out into the world of Anthos to find a job and get himself into the
inner workings of Anthos. But before he left, his father had pulled him into
his room and started talking,” Quentin Lazara Forest, I know that you are about
to leave and go out into the world. But before you leave I think you have the
right to know about my secrets.” Quentin was shocked, he… he didn’t know what
to say. “My first is, I am a mercenary, even your mother doesn’t know this but
if you decide to tell her, please let her down gently. Also, your brother is
indeed a soldier but as a side-job he works with me as an apprentice and has
exceeding good skill at this. Now this is my proposal, I think Lance should go
out on his own. And I have asked him to take you as an apprentice, if you say
no, I understand. If you say yes, I also understand.” Quentin bubbled with
extreme rage, he whispered to himself,” My whole life is a lie.” Quentin then
stormed out of his room and stormed out the door, without a goodbye to his
mother, father, or brother. The brother he thought was the most honest, most
trustworthy person in the world, but he was a dirty filthy liar, a mercenary,
of all the jobs he is a mercenary. Quentin, over the next 23 years, never
talked to his family again and he worked on his battle skills and trained
himself to be on edge but, never decided to kill anyone without justice and
honor.

 

Personality: Not extremely classy or friendly,
but is extremely smart and uses a lot of unused words in the elven language. He
also is courageous and is conscious about his decisions, so he doesn’t take a
lot of risks.

 

Ambitions: To become a general in the army, die
an honorable death, and to defend any innocent at any costs, and to come clean
about his family’s past to his friends.

 

Special Skills: Very Diplomatic, Extremely Smart

 

Weaknesses: Not a talkative person, cant talk to
others very well, doesn’t take too many risks.

 

Looks: Short Brown hair, Blues eyes, Medium build, 5’6”

 

Extra Information: None

[aron. 427]

 

Unfortunately, it has been well over 24 hours, and the problem with your skin still persists. Changing the colour of his clothes is not what I am referring to, but I'll try to line it out for you, to be more clear.

 

- The blue eye pixel, representing the pupil, is below the white pixel. This makes it looks like the person is constantly looking down.

 

- The smile is pretty derpy looking, to  be perfectly honest

 

- All in all, it just doesn't look anywhere near like what you'd expect to see in a fantasy world.

 

I'm very sorry that this had to be the reason for denial, but since it was the only thing that left me to deny you in the end, I will let you skip the 24 hour rule. Just make sure to apply with a different skin; try requesting one from one of the many talented people in the community

[aron. 427]

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