[Denied]Lightblast's Application

[lightblast10 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - lightblast

How old are you?: - 10

What time-zone do you live in?: - Pst

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - No

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No

How did you hear about us?: -My bro creepercreep987

What do you think the server will be like? - Fun

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - No spamming in chat

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - to play your part or role

What’s metagaming?: - going beyond the supposed limits

What’s powergaming?: - maximising progress towards a specific goal

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Skylord

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - human

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 19

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - They were born in a cloud and fell to the hard ground on a stormy night

What are they like (personality)?: - Fun Determined

What are their ambitions?: - to survive

Do they have any special skills?: - to hit there fist into the ground and make it shake

What are their weaknesses?: - his face

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Long blond hair with black eyes

Anything else you want to say about them?: - Nope

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

file://localhost/Users/test/Desktop/Screen%20shot%202013-10-13%20at%208.54.43%20AM.png

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Your definitions are all incorrect or not entirely correct. Please expand on them and edit them correctly in your next application.

 

Your skin screenshot did not show up. Use this thread to help your figure out how to post it.

 

Include more lore and effort in your biography. You need more then just a few sentences. I'd like to see you expand on every in character portion of your application and show more effort towards it all.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

 

[cruzazul 2815]

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