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The Definitions are too vague, and the ones for meta and powergaming are wrong.
Unfortunately your backstory is very cliche, orcs killing your parent(s) and so forth. It also wouldn't make much sense that an elven father left a woman pregnant with his child as elven pregnancies are a rare and treasured occurance.
The weakness towards fire isn't really a weakness. We're all weak to fire, no?
I know it sounds like a lot, and it is, but luckily there are lots of helpful Application Moderators around to help! Plus you got the wiki and hundreds of posts that you can use, so not to worry, Evaladiva!
Good luck, and I'll see ya later!
I suggest checking out our wiki or the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.