[Denied][Pending] Kszne's Re-Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -   KSZNE
How old are you?: -  14
What time-zone do you live in?: -  France +1

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  On some other servers such as Dungeon Realms and Wynncraft. 
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  Yes. ^^
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - This is my first second time. Link to first one is here : http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/111181-application-kszne/

How did you hear about us?: - Arttuj and mobmob, 2 of my friends.
What do you think the server will be like? -  Awesome, amazing, unique features and a lot of gameplay with friends with roleplaying, my favorite type of minecraft gameplay. 
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -   

• Try to not overuse a resource if it is not in your character’s nature, whether this is harvesting an entire field of wheat and leaving it barren, or slaughtering all of a player’s animals.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  Roleplaying is impersonating another being or thing and playing as that character. Basically, getting into the skin of your new character

What’s metagaming?: -  Using things like Forums and Skype/Teamspeak +Internet messaging to find out information about a certain character.

What’s powergaming?: - Completing actions that couldn't be stopped by anyone else.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Jacques Boulange

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  Human

What sex are they?: -  Male

How old are they?: -  23

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): -  Lived in the kingdom of Renatus, in the city of Al'Khazar. His dad Guard. His family was made up of his mom and his dad. His dad was a Lieutenant. After getting badly injured he was forced to stop . His mom raised him from the age of 8 years old with little help from his dad, as he was out  helping in the military a lot. Every day he remembers that his dad severed to protect the kingdom and his family. His father died of old age and left a widow and a son.  He made a promise to his mother that he would avenge his dad and complete his childhood dream.

What are they like (personality)?: -  Jacques is a calm person, who knows what to do, when to do it and and most importantly how to do it. Although he may have some impulsion's towards attacking anything that is evil/harmful for s race and family, he can show signs of maturity. He loves helpings other people.

What are their ambitions?: - His main goal is to avenge his father. He wants to train and train to eventually become one of the best hunters in Anthos.

Do they have any special skills?: - He is EXTREMELY good with axes. His special ability is his  "Cranium Wrecker", sort of splits the head of the enemy in two, yucky...

What are their weaknesses?: -  Arrows. Don't let Jacques get his by an arrow. His dad was shot by an arrow when he died. It's always been the families week spot.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  He is white. Short black hair. Has a headband, light brown. He has shorts on. He is white. He has brown cloths and a light brown jacket to keep himself warm. He always carries his small backpack with him to store things he get's on his adventures.

Anything else you want to say about them?: -  He's very intelligent and has an huge sense of appetite. (eats a lot)

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -    

Here's a link

 

http://wynncraft.com...kinviewer/KSZNE

Edited May 31, 2014 by KSZNE

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Denied.

 

- You failed to add examples to your definitions.

 

- Renatus AND Al'Khazar were both in Aegis/Asulon. We aren't in either of those places currently, nor Anthos. We are in /The Fringe/. Update all of your lore.

 

- Your skin doesn't have shorts on.

 

Reapply AFTER twenty four hours, and PM me with your questions.

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