[Denied]Aplication - Vilius007

[ERUCZ 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - vilius007

How old are you?: - 16

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - Not in a minecraft server but in a lot of other games, mainly SAMP(also some RP with my friends in minecraft aswell)

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - Nope

 

How did you hear about us?: -From a fellow RP veteran friend like me that said that this server is really good with quality roleplaying

What do you think the server will be like? - Well very intresting aswell ,if i may say addicting at some point, as i heard that the realism and intensity of the roleplay is massive

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - The Combat rules that make the game a mental, maybe a veteran-like game where not PVP battles matter but the imagination,vocabulary and inteligence

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:-

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):-Yes i do understand every rule i read about

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is a way of changing personalities in-game with the help of the characters you are creating, roleplaying must make sens and be realistic enough, so basically it's a way of expressing your other personalities via the game you are playing and the character you are creating...sorry if i am repeating but i want to make that understood.

 

What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is transmiting OOC(out of character) messages in IC situations like,...when you are robbed by a bandit and you want to mesage your friend via skype/steam or anything of that nature to help you...IC is not possible to do that, YOU DO NOT OWN super-powers..or some sort

 

What’s powergaming?: - Powergaming is exagerating an action letting no room to respond to the other person you are RP-ing with...as an example take a fight, you can't say that */me hits you with my sword and dies* It is not permited,it's beyond the limits of the normal human..uh...what i want to say is that PG (powergaming) is when you RP superpowers that ruin RP and makes you OP (overpowered)

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: - Alhen Dreekman

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - Human

 

What gender are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 38

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): - He was living with his little brother Robert , his mother and his father Aleistar.They were a middle class, contented and really, nothing could've bring it down.Untill one day,when their father ran away, saying nothing to noone not even his wife of children.Soon after that the brother's mother got ill and died shortly after leaving the two boys all alone.As it goes their father wasn't dead and it seemed that he ran to live a merchant's life..and when he died well he gave all the gold and wares to his children.When the two got the gold Alhen ran away from home with half of the money leaving his brother Robert alone.He invested the money in some weares and gone throughout the world selling them for a better price.That's when Alhen learned to trade and to examine the people he met in order to achive his goals.As the time passed Alhen heard that his little brother Robert joined a sailor life and decided(as he was able because the good deals he made) to go find him and reunite again.So that's how Alhen ended in city of Vekaro, in a old tavern he spoke to some mercenaries,to help him find his brother...needless to say they mocked Alhen and pushed him around...and that's when the thing started to become a real brawl...luckly his brother was  there Robert, at first Alhen didn't notice nor recognised him but after the brawl ended victorious for the brothers Alhen tracked Robert throughout the land in order to find his smaller brother.(that didn't recognised Alhen at first).Still if not weathy Alhen still haves a decent sum of money that he will spend to find his brother with taking carriages ,food,water and other usefull things that helped him in his journey.Eventually he will find it, i know he will...(and he will meet him IC and RP that :) )

 

What are they like? (personality): - He is confident, wise and worn in battle,he is treacherous with his enemies and reliable with his friends and he also knows what he wants.Inteligent aswell giving a more important role to the word than the blade.

 

What are their ambitions?: - To become a ruler on a part of the land,forging a new Kingdom with the help of his smaller brother and his past experience with money and people aswell

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - His ain't that strong but have an exceptional capacity of knowing his surroundings aswell he is emotional but he has a lionhart.He is brave and bold,but as i said he's having som problems with his strenght,meaning that he can't fight aswell as his brother does,utterly bringing his brother on top of him as the phisycal training goes.

 

Give us a description of how they look?: - Blonde medium hair,well defined but not buffed up or packed with muscles,blue eyes,tall...aproximative 1.80 meters

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://min.us/i/uqpzKjF8wJ0J

 

 

Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

[Eleatic 1033]

Unfortunately denied. 

 

The Weaknesses are fine, but you lack some grammatical ability which is good to see in applications(though was not the reason for my denial).

 

Your ambitions, and singular lore mention, are lacking in quality. Please feel free to reapply in 24hours. Thank you for applying. PM me if you have any questions.

[Tsuyose 3285]

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