[Denied]Application

[Kohlbsterpk 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Kohlbsterpk

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No abusing glitches

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend told me about this server

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:the acting out or performance of a particular role

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game

What is powergaming?: powergaming is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Borin Farfelle

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Highlander Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Borin was born in the kingdom of Oren. He was just a farmer living with his mother and father when the undead attacked the kingdom of Renatus. A family moved in next door to our house and thats when Borin met Magnus and Merek. They helped me on my family's farm and we became best friends. When he was 16, he got his first bow and arrow from his father and practiced whenever he could. When Borin was 24, he heard that Merek's mother died. The three best friends used the savings they had and bought armor and weapons and became mercenaries.

Personality Traits: Adventurous

Ambitions: Have a family

Strengths/Talents: Agile, Great with bows

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not much experience outside of his home town

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Brown hair, Blue eye's, 5:6, 173Lbs

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Jonificus 2763]

[Jonificus 2763]

You may re-apply in 24 hours, and make sure to private message me if you have any questions.

 

You have been denied for plagiarizing your definition on metagaming, this is your first and final warning or else you will be banned from applying for a week.

 

Besides from this, your biography is rather small and uninformative about your character. Perhaps you could elaborate on why he got the bow and arrow? what was his friendship like with Magnus and Merek? Why did they decide to become mercenaries all of a sudden when they already worked on a farm?

 

You could also have shown more of his adventurous personality, I don't see how he is adventerous when his weakness is little experience of the world outside of his home town. An adventerous person surely would've have gone outside the comfort of his town for some excitement would they not?

[Jonificus 2763]

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