[Denied]Fishboy101416: Submission

[fishboy101416 0]

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - fishboy101416

How old are you?: - 11

What time-zone do you live in?: - ireland and the uk

Have you ever roleplayed before - yes if you have, how?: - runescape

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  no

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - 3 time already and i don't know how to link and that shouldn't matter so much 

How did you hear about us?: - looking for servers

What do you think the server will be like? - a good fun RPG  

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - Please don't spam any of our chat feeds  i hate spamers!

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - roleplayings is play as a chater in a story  

What’s metagaming?: - I DON"T KNOW! WIKI AND THOSE ISN'T HELPING AND IT SHOULDN'T MATTER THIS MUCH! I WOULD'NT METAGAME

What’s powergaming?: - power gaming is where you finish the game wayyyyyy to quickly.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Lupus (note Lupus mean wolf in Latin 

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - man

What sex are they?: - male

How old are they?: - 15 (i don't care about the age limit it shouldn't matter)

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - his father died in a shipwreck and two days later his mother was killed in the street. every day the man who killed her came to say sorry but Lupus just shut the door in his face. on the 4'th day Lupus got a knife and stabbed him the in chest then flead to Ansthos 

What are they like (personality)?: - mysterious, rarely talks and where he does it sounds strange (they say he has no tounge)

What are their ambitions?: - to find out why his mother was killed

Do they have any special skills?: - fighting with knifes and hunting

What are their weaknesses?: - sailing  but loves swimming

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - sea green eyes, short black hair and tall (5.9)

Anything else you want to say about them?: - scared of the sea but loves swimming

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  

 

[Nug 2011]

Sadly, I have decided to deny this application for the following reason(s):

• Firstly, all three definitions are incorrect, just because the one Wiki doesn't have information on it, doesn't mean you should just leave it blank, put some effort into it.
• Your character should be 18 or up. You're not special and you can't just avoid rules, no one else does.
• Please specify what race you're applying for, by putting 'man', I'm assuming you are applying for a human, if so, please put human instead of man in the space.
• Your character's story tells nothing of your actual character besides that his parents died (which is very cliche), put more effort into it, include server lore (things like locations, people, events, etc. All can be found throughout the forums and the Wiki.) and information on his childhood, more on his family, where he lived, where he is now, blah blah blah.
• Expand upon his ambitions/weaknesses/special skills, explain how he developed them, what makes him weak to sailing, just elaborate overall.
• You have not posted your application on our Minecraft Forums page, please do so, it can be found here.
• Also, just a note, just because you think something shouldn't or doesn't matter, doesn't mean you can just skip over it, you're not some sort of special applicant who can avoid or break rules, keep that in mind.

You may reapply 24 hours from this post. if you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me.

[Nug 2011]

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