[Denied]Omega's First Application

[IcyJazzy 6]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - OmegaTy    

How old are you?: - 19

What time-zone do you live in?: - (UTC-05:00) Eastern Time (US & Canada)

 

 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - No

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No

 

 

How did you hear about us?: - EmilyBlackheart

What do you think the server will be like? - Medieval Times

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  When you set your Minecraft skin, make sure it suits your character and race - don't have something totally irrelevant, or non-roleplay. Please, also don't use a nude skin!

 

 

Definitions

 

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

 

What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is when you go into your deepest imagination and pull out your either Alter ego or another character and play as them.

 

What’s metagaming?: - Using out of character advantages to your characters benefits.

 

What’s powergaming?: - Using emotes to a player that didn't even have a chance to survive or using over powered emotes to kill off a player such as "Player 1 shots and kills Player 2 in the heart" not even giving player 2 to dodge.

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: - Ramza Shiruto

 

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -Halfling - Woodelf/Human

 

What sex are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 19

 

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - In Anothos, Son of Fran  and Craft Shiruto , Ramza was born is the woodlands of Malinor. As a child of an skilled archer mother and a mixed weapon master father, Ramza was trained and pushed very hard to become a strong freelancer. Ramza's childhood consenced of training and more training. Living with his hardworking family, Ramza wanted to be free and adventure the world. One Night, Ramza snuck out to adventure out the night and see what Anthos was all about. Hours pass, Ramza smells burning and hears the shouts of people in pain. As Ramza rushes back to his village, he spots the village being raided  but many bandits. Ramza spots his parents fighting some off bandits , he rushes to their aid and help them. Fighting off the bandits but the fighting continued as the numbers got higher and higher, Fran demands Ramza to go to safety and they'll stay and help the others escape. As Ramza turns to make his way to safely he hears the scream of Fran and turns around in shock noticing Fran was stabbed through the chest. Stunned in pure fear and shock, Ramza couldn't move, holding hand out to Fran. Noticing what is going on Ramza's father Craft swiftly goes to Fran and kills the bandit and yells at Ramza "Son! Get out of here now! Come back in the morning! We'll be here for you!". Coming back to reality, Ramza snaps out of his trance reading Fran's last words "You will fight and live another day my son.." and nods and runs into the forest with tears flowing out his eyes. The next morning, Ramza returns to the village looking around seeing no bandits around but only burned down houses and dead bodies around. Ramza notices his parents weapons are around two bodies so he rushes to them. As Ramza sees that both parents are dead, angered by their deaths he decides to take there weapons. Craft says with a mutter voice says to Ramza as his last words, "Ramza, take our weapons..you are our hope..we'll always be with you..we'll keep you safe..you are in..control..". Ramza taking Craft's last words to heart, he nods and equips the weapons and leaves the burned village with new thoughts and ambitions.

What are they like (personality)?: - Ramza is very shy and mysterious when in public. Ramza has a very big heart and is very kind to children. He has a very soft spot for Elf women but likes to be the strong and mysterious type. 

 

What are their ambitions?: - Ramza wants to farther his weapon mastery like his father and find out else is in Anthos.

 

Do they have any special skills?: - Being trained in many weapons by his parents. Being able to carry and use his weapons in a very spontaneous and skilled performance. Ramza carries  a sword on his belt(right side), a Lance on his back, Roped knives in both boots, Short Bow on his back as well, an Axe on his belt (left side) and Small Shield on his right arm. Ramza very well trained with the weapons so which makes him very useful and well strategist in his surroundings.

 

What are their weaknesses?: - Even though Ramza is very skilled in using and carrying a lot of weapons, Ramza can not keep up at times and will slow down to get rest due to having low stamina. Also, Ramza is very naive.

 

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  he is shown to wear a set of armor over a blue long-sleeved tunic, he wears brown leather gloves, long leather boots that go over his knees, over black trousers.

 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - He is not overpowered with him being trained in the varies of weapons he carries. He can just use them in his own way for defense and offense but uses a a lot of his stamina.

 

 

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

 

 

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[ski_king3 0]

 

Your definitions are not quite correct. If you need help, I would advise looking here. It'll give you solid definitions to each one, just be sure not to plagiarize.

 

Halflings are not the same as half-breeds. It's minor, but your character does not appear to be a halfling. Look here if you're confused.

 

Your biography is alright, but there isn't a whole lot of server lore there. You must use more lore specific to our server to your application. Also, it's rather cliche to have your parents killed, it might be useful to change that.

 

Your skills and weaknesses are not very balanced. Also, the number of weapons he carries is not very realistic.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

[ski_king3 0]

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