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[holdensteel 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - holdensteel
How old are you?: - 13
What time-zone do you live in?: - eastern pacific


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - no
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - yes
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - yes http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/103031-2nd-app/#entry948327


How did you hear about us?: -my little bro
What do you think the server will be like? - a relaxed rp server
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes
What’s your favorite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - no hacking, i hate hackers


Definitions

What is role-playing?: - when you take the role of a player. ie: i am the blacksmith and I make swords for other players.

What’s meta-gaming?: - when you use outside resources to gain an advantage ie: Player 1 are Player 2 are role-playing. Player 1 gets caught by guards in town and is going to be killed by player 2. Player 1 teleports to spawn using the /spawn command with no role-playing reason.

What’s powergaming?: - forcing people to do actions ie: player 1 walks up to player 2 and says "You die!" and player 2 has done nothing.

In-Character Information

What’s your character called?: - Holton Smith

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human ,Southerner

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 24

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Holton was born in the city of Abresi. His parents were very abusive too him, but he never fought back; he loved them. Around the time he was 1 his parents died protecting him from zombies.A traveler found him on the road,all lonely. The traveler took Holton as his own.The traveler was a librarian, he had many books.The traveler Taught Holton to read when he was 5. Holton consumed is time by reading. He grew deeply fascinated by his ancestors. He learned that he was the long lost brother of Grey Terdovea  (GOGREYGO {Owner of the character Grey} HAS GIVEN ME PERMISSION TO USE HIS CHARACTER AND LORE). That set his quest to find his brother.He was now 14. His dad (the traveler) one day told him to go out and collect some fire wood. Being the good person he was, he picked up his hatchet and went out side to get fire wood. About and hour later Holton returned with a bundle of wood. He called Dad, i'm home!" No answer. "DAD?" Still, no answer. Worried he ran into his dads room to find a note on the bed.It read

   

           -Son,I want you to find your brother. Don't come looking for me. You wont find me.The is a sword in the basement and a bow in the attic. You'll know want to do. I always loved you. But its time that ended. Its part of growing up, the capability of facing death.-

 

Devastated, Holton lie on the bed. It seemed like hours just sitting, not knowing what to do. Not having anything else to do, He found the bow and sword, packed his belongings and set out. He stood at a fork in the road, there was a sign. The sign was in cursive, which he had no idea how to read. so he choose the left path. Along the way he learned from hunting to become a pretty decent swordsmen. He wasn't a bad shot, either. Holton is now 24 and camping in the route from Abresi.

What are they like (personality)?: - Absent minded, hot headed, emotional 

What are their ambitions?: - To be above every one, the best of the best

Do they have any special skills?: - good inventor

What are their weaknesses?: - social award moments

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - brown hair,small beard green eyes about 6'1"

Anything else you want to say about them?: - nope



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://mcss.me/holdensteel Attached File download.png 10.15K 0 downloads

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has has been...

 

 

 

 

-Your biography again makes little sense... Your parents were abusive to you, yet you never fought back, yet - your parents died whilst you were 1 years old. so, a one year old restricted himself from fighting his parents?

 

-If Holton's parents had been killed when he was 1 how could he even have tracked his heritage at all?

 

-Again - Your explanation of your parents randomly dieing from random zombies makes no sense.

 

- Again, you special skills and weaknesses make no sense. What does he invent? where did he learn to invent? why does he invent stuff?. And truly...how can social award moments be a weakness?

 

-You may re-apply in  24 hours.

 

-If you have any questions feel free to shoot me a PM.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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