[Denied]My Application

[CptShampoo 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - CptShampoo

How old are you?: - 14

What time-zone do you live in?: - CST

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I have, I have played WOW RP, SA-RP and some minecraft RP servers.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Like I said above. Some WOW RP servers, SA-RP server, and some minecraft servers.

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Never applied.

How did you hear about us?: - Friend

What do you think the server will be like? - An amazingly fun RP server where I can RP with people and have fun.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes, I have read and agreed to the rules.

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - The no griefing rule. I hate when I put lots of work into building something and then it gets destroyed by some random person.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Roleplay is when you put your view into another persons eyes (your chars)

What’s metagaming?: - Taking information out of character and bringing it in character

What’s powergaming?: - When you do something that exceed the power your char can do. For example: (/me throws his axe to the mans head, leading to a death.) 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Burul

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Orog Orc

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 32

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - 

 

When Burul was a little cub, born in the Sandy Dunes, his parents where allowed to have kids by there slave owner. He had a ruff life being a slave as the slave owner was really mean to him and his parents. He was always wiped and hurt by the slave owner. As he grew up he ran away from the orcs being in fear of them. 

 

He had a nice life with the humans for the rest of his 'teen' years. The humans always took care of him, they gave him shelter, food, and all the things a child needed. He grew up to his 20s ready to fight the orcs for what they have done. He visited the orc lands trying to find out how he will pull this attack with the humans. The orcs did not know who he was so they just thought he was looking around. They where very friendly to him this time, they gave him some food.

 

Eventually, he found the orcs to be very friendly so he decided to search for his parents. The town had changed quite a bit since he was around. He talked about a slave owner, of course there was allot of them. He talked about a child running away from his snagga parents, most of the people knew about that child. He told the people that he was that child that ran away. They said his parents are still around looking for him. He decided to search for his parents. To this day he is still searching for his parents, still.

What are they like (personality)?: - He is a nice orc, but if anyone messes with him he will not accept that. He will fight back if someone does mess with him. 

What are their ambitions?: - He really wants to find his parents. That is his goal in life.

Do they have any special skills?: - He does not have any special skills just yet. Unless you call being skilled with an axe a "special skill".

What are their weaknesses?: - He is often nice witch make him not want to fight. He is very dumb and can't processes things quick. 

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He is a 7'9 tall orc. Short black hair. Big/fat. And big tusk. 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - No, nothing I Have to say.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -http://prntscr.com/2fbyq3



Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[Friendly Guy 223]

While this was a very interesting app it had many issues.

 

1. Once your Orc leaves orcish culture your not just allowed back, You become a "Whitewash" and have to go through many trials to be allowed back. While it is unlikely that you would survive being a whitewash a back story should be told about how you escaped orcish lands ((As Orcs kill whitewashes as they are seen as weak))

2. It would be hard pressed to find a accepting family from humans ((As orcs often kill many humans)) Many humans would out right kill you a story of how your parents hid you from the general public should be included ((Aka on a farm ect.))

 

3. Weaknesses should include things such as the inability too swim or unable to use a bow. please add more weaknesses like these

 

((Apologies on how long it took for your app to be reviewed the other app team member seems to have logged off after claiming the app))

[Friendly Guy 223]

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