[Denied]6Wowee Application

[6wowee 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - 6wowee
How old are you?: - 11
What time-zone do you live in?: - New York time


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Other minecraft servers.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Urbancraft, Teracrafters, Broncin city.
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - no


How did you hear about us?: -I saw your server on planetminecraft.com
What do you think the server will be like? – It will be fun and it will have a medival feel to it.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - Dont be racist in real life, be racist in the game with in game rases.


Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - When you play a game and you have a role to do when you have something to be.

What’s metagaming?: - Cheating

What’s powergaming?: - You rush to a goal without having fun on an rpg.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Dominic

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human, Northerner

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 20

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Father and mother were part of a small merchant class. Father died from poison at a fiest when he was ten killer still unknown dominic hated father and mother espicially mother, ran away from mother at age of 15 on the way he befriended a southerner Who was also running away his name was Alexander but sadly Alexander died from a creeper attack on their journey to seek shelter in other cities.

What are they like (personality)?: - Open to detail, keen and alert, inventive.

What are their ambitions?: - Be the best archer. In the land.

Do they have any special skills?: - Archery

What are their weaknesses?: - afraid of creepers scarred from attack when he ran away.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Dark Hair Light Skin

Anything else you want to say about them?: - no



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - 6wowee
How old are you?: - 11
What time-zone do you live in?: - New York time


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Other minecraft servers.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Urbancraft, Teracrafters, Broncin city.
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - no


How did you hear about us?: -I saw your server on planetminecraft.com
What do you think the server will be like? – It will be fun and it will have a medival feel to it.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - Dont be racist in real life, be racist in the game with in game rases.


Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - When you play a game and you have a role to do when you have something to be.

What’s metagaming?: - Cheating

What’s powergaming?: - You rush to a goal without having fun on an rpg.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Dominic

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human, Northerner

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 20

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Father and mother were part of a small merchant class. Father died from poison at a fiest when he was ten killer still unknown dominic hated father and mother espicially mother, ran away from mother at age of 15 on the way he befriended a southerner Who was also running away his name was Alexander but sadly Alexander died from a creeper attack on their journey to seek shelter in other cities.

What are they like (personality)?: - Open to detail, keen and alert, inventive.

What are their ambitions?: - Be the best archer. In the land.

Do they have any special skills?: - Archery

What are their weaknesses?: - afraid of creepers scarred from attack when he ran away.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Dark Hair Light Skin

Anything else you want to say about them?: - no



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/3647951/medieval-thief/
 

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are completely incorrect. Please research their real meanings and give us the correct definitions. Also, note: We are a roleplay (RP) server, not RPG; There is a difference between them.

 

- Your biography was very short and lacked any and all detail. You just rushed through your character's life without explaining any events. Why was his father's food poisoned? Why did he hate his parents? Where did he run away too? What did he do with this southerner he befriended? Please give plenty more detail on the events in your character's life to make it in to an actual story, not just a boring run-down of what happened to him.

 

- Your biography lacks any server lore. Please include plenty of official server lore, which can be found here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ . Also, this is worth noting: Creepers do not exist and have never existed in Lord of the Craft's lore, so do not include them in your bio.

 

- Your ambitions are pretty cliche and don't really have much passion behind them. Why does your character wish to become the greatest archer ever? What will he do if he aspires to this goal? Also, you may wish to work on your weaknesses, considering Creepers do not exist in Lord of the Craft. Keep in mind: A weakness needs to be something that makes your character 'flawed' or at a disadvantage when compared to another character.

 

- I noticed you seem to have pasted your application twice. I'm sure this was an accident, so it's not a big deal, but try to make sure you don't do this again next time as it may be considered 'breaking the application format'.

 

Needs a lot of work, but in all, not a bad application. Spend a lot of time on your bio, making sure it's an interesting and compelling story. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

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