[Denied][Pending] Application For Whitelist

[Brankamin 0]

Out-Of-Character Information



What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  Brankamin
How old are you?: - 21
What time-zone do you live in?: - EST


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes. mostly on forums and chat clients, however.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes, but mostly pony-related.
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No


How did you hear about us?: -Google :3
What do you think the server will be like? - Exciting adventures, and more serious players than the other servers i've played on!
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - 

 

• Consistently depriving another player (or players) of their fun for your own personal gain or amusement, even after receiving appropriate warnings, is punishable if deemed necessary by the moderation teams. This may also be considered harassment. Essentially, don't be a troublesome player that only plays to annoy others or be a nuisance.

Definitions


What is roleplaying?: - Taking on the persona of a character to write a story from different points of view

What’s metagaming?: - mixing OOC and IC knowledge.

What’s powergaming?: - Godmoding, I.E making 'movements' that can't be blocked or otherwise prevented, not offering an opportunity for the other person to fight back.

In-Character Information



What’s your character called?: - Daurinniel Alleryn

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - High Elf

What sex are they?: - Female

How old are they?: - 35 (elf years)

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Daurinniel was born to an elven noble, that is, higher than most high elves, but not quite royalty. She spent most of her life running around in between lessons on nobility, elven history, and various other responsibilities required of a young elven maiden. She has a bit of a mischievous, cocky streak at times, not befitting one of her status, and, as such, she had set her mind on becoming a healer--more specifically, she prefers plant-based magic to the weapons most of the other girls prefer--that is, staves; bows and arrows; and of course, elven longswords.  Sometime in the recent past, her father's lands came under siege, and she was sent away so that she may survive, though he sent her brothers off to war to fight. 

What are they like (personality)?: - She's energetic and most of the time, a happy, helpful elf...unless you do something to harm her or someone she's close to. In the case of a personal attack, her demeanor turns absolutely icy, and she ceases helping out--even though she's bound to in most cases.

What are their ambitions?: - She spends most of her time studying healing magic, even though her father insisted she should become a priestess if she wanted to be a healer so badly.

Do they have any special skills?: - She has a tendency towards talking her way out of bad situations, rather than fighting her way out. 

What are their weaknesses?: - Ew?! is that a spider?! --She doesn't like bugs, and DEFINITELY doesn't like slimy, gross, poisonous things!

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - The elf maiden has golden, yet pale blonde hair and blue eyes the color of the sky around mid-day. Normally she prefers to wear natural materials, mostly woven cotton and silks. 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - 



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - I need to make a new one! buut..I really need a good skin making site to do so

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been denied because you didn't make the following changes in the 24 hour period:

 

- Your definitions aren't wrong, but your metagaming definition needs a bit more detail or possibly an example.

 

- Your biography is quite nice, but doesn't really contain any server lore. Please include plenty, including at least a couple of cities and mention of a few of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, use our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ . Also, add some more events that have had an impact on your character and made them in to who they are today; Create a really interesting story for them!

 

- You really need to get a screenshot of your skin! You can do it by any means necessary, it doesn't matter; just so long as we can clearly see your skin is appropriate. If you need help getting a screenshot, check out this guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/

 

Please make sure you've fixed these points before posting again. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any further questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

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