[Denied]Blackfoot Longbeard Application

[jlongacre321 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - minningstar911

How old are you?: - 14

What time-zone do you live in?: - (GMT) 3

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes quite a lot , there my favorite type of games.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes, i've played on ,  BlackSmoke and alot others .

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): -Yes , 

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How did you hear about us?: -Role-Playing Minecraft sites.

What do you think the server will be like? - Living in medieval times.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -

Yes and yes

 

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - Make sure you don't   break any of the server's lore - it's there for a reason!

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - role-playing to assume attitudes, actions, and discourse of another, especially in a make believe situation in a effort to understand a different point of  view or social interaction.

What’s metagaming?: - meta is using outside information to further your interest, not your characters. Meta does not help your character , it actually limits him, because if presented with the same situation you will be unable to react in a way that falls within the confines of whatever the world you are interacting in, and instead will turn to meta again, creating a cycle that ends in a ban.  

What’s powergaming?: - emoting, first of all, is using mechanics not alreasy in the game that enhance your ability  to roleplay in the game universe. Pe is exploting  these by doing things suck as saying you can run faster " just because". or commiting actions that are not lore. A good example of this.  where it may be  exploited, is where if i were a guard, and were attempting to capture a criminal, i would go up and immediatley handcuff him . I must instead emoute attempting to handcuff him. He can then attempt an escape using /roll, for an example allowing him to have a chance at resisting arrest,rather than being immediate. 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Blackfoot longbeard

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - drawf

What sex are they?: -  male

How old are they?: - 37

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - I was born deep underground, in an minning settlement along the deeproad. the people of this  area were extreamly isolated, and still are. I was born to a loving father and mother, and was subjected to a nurturing home life.When Ibecame of age, I became a miner and began working in  the coal mine, the only commodity  the community could trade for food. However  this was not enough; I wanted to see the cities  of the world , see the above, and work as a warrior, as a khorok for the king. Ron has an extremely  restless spirit, and shares his villages view on how the dwarves should conduct foreign policy.It simply shouldn't  .The dwarves were fine before the other races, so they should mind their own business, not participate in wars, and certainly not let other races into their holds.-i keep the god Armakak, firmly believeing in the tenets of the Dwarven faith.To Roland,faithwas there for him in the dark if a tunnel caved in, it lightend his way; luck and chance has always been on my side in endeavors.

What are they like (personality)?: - Friendly  but emotional ,  fierce at fighting  

What are their ambitions?: -  To run a coal shop , and then after serve in the  Navy on a ship

Do they have any special skills?: -  Two handed swords or  axes, and bows.

What are their weaknesses?: -  Daggers , and one-handed weapons , and  hurtful words.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  Strong, light skin, Orange hair, warrior outfit, or minning outfit on weekends.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - Lives in a small house , trains everyday for battle yet for one day to come his way.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

 

 

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been denied and I am giving you an official warning for plagiarism:

 

- Your roleplaying definition has been plagiarised from one of many possible sources. One possible source: http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/role-play

 

Your other reasons for denial include:

 

- Your Metagaming definition isn't really correct. Please give us the full correct definition and an example. I'd suggest using this page to research its meaning: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying

 

- Your biography is incoherant; It doesn't make much sense and hops between 1st and 3rd person. What is this seemingly random city where your character was born? Who is this 'King' he wants to work for? Also... Who are 'Ron' and 'Roland'? You haven't mentioned them anywhere else in your biography except for one time each... Finally, you need to stick to 1 perspective in your bio. To give you an example, here's a couple of sentences that hop from 1st to 3rd person: "I wanted to see the cities  of the world , see the above, and work as a warrior, as a khorok for the king. Ron has an extremely  restless spirit, and shares his villages view on how the dwarves should conduct foreign policy.". At first, you referred to your character as yourself, then in the next sentence, referred to him as a completely different person.

 

- Your biography doesn't include enough server lore. Please add mention of at least 2 towns or cities from Anthos and mention of at least one of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

 

- Your weaknesses aren't really weaknesses. 'Weapons' can't be weaknesses, since they're a weakness everyone has. A 'weakness' must be something unique to your character that could put them at a disadvantage in certain situations. Also, please explain why 'Hurtful words' are a weakness to him.

 

- Your skin isn't very 'Dwarf Like'. This isn't really a reason for denial, but I'd highly recommend you find a more Dwarf looking skin to avoid any possible ridicule.

 

Plagiarism is a very serious offense on Lord of the Craft and any further incidents will result in a temporary ban. Always use your own words throughout all of your application. You mostly need to work on your biography. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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