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[Eagle536 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Eagle536
How old are you?: 12
What time-zone do you live in?: AEST or AEDT
Have you ever roleplayed before?: Yes minor roleplay  on  EDawg878
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?:  No

How did you hear about us?:  Searching for a mc server then came across a guild on the server
What do you think the server will be like?: All action, whatever you say can change everything or nothing. All the different roles making up a massive working environment where everyone has a job.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: Escaping PvP combat by running into a region that restricts PvP is against the rules, such as the region surrounding the Cloud Temple.
Definitions
What is roleplaying?: Acting out a particular role regarded by a person behavior in a particular way, according the events leading to it.
 
What’s metagaming?: Is a term used to define strategy, action or method in a game which transcend, uses factors from all different areas to effect the game, or goes beyond limits or environment set by the game.
 
What’s powergaming?: Powergaming is a style of interacting with games with the aim of progressing to a specific goal.
In-Character Information
What’s your character called?: Gilan Treaty
What race are they?: Human
What sex are they?: Male
How old are they?:22
 
Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: Gilan’s dad was killed working for the army then his mother brutally murdered by soldiers Gilan was forced to fight on his own but along the way he met a ranger that changed his life forever. He learnt to wield a sword, and shoot a bow.He never miss even if drunk….
 
What are they like (personality)?: very humorous, Very serious, cautious, Very protective and Very Curious
 
What are their ambitions?: To become the Kings Ranger apart of the Human Kingdom in the fringe
 
Do they have any special skills?: the ability to sneak around unseen  and unheard of. They blend into the background like thin air. Also has impeccable sixth sense ability.
 
What are their weaknesses?: His weakness is that when he loses some1 close to him he will want to kill everyone responsible until that is done and  he will not do nothing else.
 
Give us a description of how they look?: With a quiver on their back filled with  grey shafted arrows made by the finest fletcher  in the land. With his brown, soft leather boots making, no sound when they touch the ground. Then there’s a hood when pulled up concealing his face. With his green clothing making him seem invisible to the background. Then there’s his scabbard with his two swords well-oiled and within easy reach
Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin:

[Treshure 5818]

Reasons:

 

- Both of your metagaming and powergaming definitions are plagiarized, which warrants for an immediate denial. Regardless, both are wrong.

 

- It is nice you read "The Ranger's Apprentice", but do not literally copy characters from there and put them here.

 

- Your biography is cliche, full of spelling mistakes, too short, and does not have any server lore.

 

- You do not have the correct application format, found here:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/110675-the-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours, however I advice you PM me beforehand and work out this application. You will need to put a lot more effort into it.

[Treshure 5818]

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