[Denied]Son Goku Application

[Vamoose 265]

http://i.imgur.com/eTLmTMK.png Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - “_Vamoose_”

How old are you?: - 21

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - Yes, Xbox360

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - No

How did you hear about us?: - Random internet search

What do you think the server will be like? – Epic beyond proportion, but seriously I hope it’s a beautiful server.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - Restricting the sharing of accounts

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- Yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- No

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: - Engaging in a vast dynamic environment while making situational decisions and interacting with other players that experience similar engagements.

 

What’s metagaming?: - Gaining personal advantage with out-of-game info which modifies personal experience.

 

What’s powergaming?: - Focus upon one factor of the game which enables player to maximize their optimal character, usually an uber annoying individual that intends to surpass everyone and usurp all titles in an RPG sort. Like a Xarxes type background.

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: - Son Goku

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): -  High Elf

 

What gender are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 21

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): - 

Indomitable will defines Son Goku, for his focus is a manhunt. He quests to void the existence of a putrid abomination that would annihilate all of lore. By starting his journey fresh, he began in the lonely mountain side along the dwarves. Despite being a high elf, he was found at the foothills of a mountain by a lonesome hermit. His growth alongside this peaceful guardian stemmed from their likeness of the martial arts. Eventually Goku traversed the land by himself to find himself, only to encounter villages painted in blood and fire, beaches dotted with dead fish, trees as brittle as straw and the horrid stench of death. He witnessed the works of the daemons, and upon witnessing the grotesque work of these monsters, he exploded into a rage and released energy so pure it could light a city. Since this day he has traveled to seek the daemons and to return the hurt back to them. (I tried…)

 

What are they like? (personality): -  Incredible sense of humor, sarcasm and tendency to forget things.

 

What are their ambitions?: - To innovate and to innovate and sometimes even innovate.

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - 

STR: Melee, Magic, Bow, Engineering, Architecture Planning.

WK: Swimming, Climbing Trees, Using TNT.

 

 

Give us a description of how they look?: - 

Blond, Green Eyes, Orange Tunic with blue belt, blue shoes and insignia on back and front.

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://i.imgur.com/eTLmTMK.png

 

[OhDeerLord 673]

 

Your powergaming definition is wrong 

 

Your whole application is hard to read- I understand trying to use big and fancy words, but when it becomes heavy and stilting it just becomes frustrating. It just ends up making the grammar odd and the whole thing difficult to read. Losen up abit, calm down, relax your writing.

You don't need to be a A++ briliant writer for the server.

 

It really seems like you are applying as Goku from Dragon Ball Z, Create your own character and you'll have a lot more fun on this server!

 

If your trying to 'innovate' Describe what your trying to, really. Don't just say 'innovate' three times.

 

How did he gain these strengths? Why are his weaknesses like that? Also Using TNT is not a weakness, its just something you havent learned yet.

 

Your skin, from what you've described, seems like it will be Goku going super Sayian. I suggest finding a new skin- also you can upload the skin to a image sharing website like Imgur or Photobucket in order to get a picture.

[OhDeerLord 673]

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