[Denied]New Application - Redquirk

[RedQuirk 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - RedQuirk

How old are you?: - 15

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - No, I haven't.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - No, I haven't.

 

How did you hear about us?: - Word of mouth, specifically sausageeater told me.

What do you think the server will be like? - Hopefully similar to Garry's Mod servers that I have played in my favourite game - Minecraft!

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - "Fade to black" I agree with greatly because it allows RP to be carried out without all the "gore" and general nuisance some situations call for.

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- Yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- Could you just clarify what you can/can't do as a villain? If so thank you.

 

Definition

What is roleplaying?: - Where you act out a situation for fun!

What’s metagaming?: - Using something that your character wouldn't otherwise know but the player knows.

What’s powergaming?: -  Where you skip/ruin the atmosphere of the game for your own purpose.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Eregon

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): -  Elf, Dark Elf

 

What gender are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 185

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): -  Born before the move to New Malinor, Eregon was 20 when a scourge raid on Malinor occurred, too young and lacking the knowledge to fight he ran away and sheltered in his home town of Lenniel, because his father was a warrior in Gradewalkers he also strived to become like his fathers prowess. Moving to Aegis he trained to become one with nature but unable to do so struck out at his mentors ( druid priests) and could not live with himself and so he started his addiction for strong beer and fine wine by going to a human city in the south! After 60 years Eragon was lost in a human way of life and was tired of beers, wines that tasted of manure  and human entertainment and so decided to piece together the mystery of 1200 and to redeem himself to the High Elves.

What are they like? (personality): - He regards himself as a great speaker, speaking his mind in many taverns. As well as being an alcoholic he also is remarkably quick tempered when his family is dishonoured by a human farmer, short and greedy dwarf or sluggish and dumb orc!

What are their ambitions?: - To see the realms of Aegis, Asulon and Anthos as a whole so that he can piece together what happened at 1200. Also to become a great yet warrior like his father who served in the Gladewatchers, one of the few dark elves to ever serve.

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - Skills - Swordsmanship, sharp and agile with a sword in his hand; Courting elfesses (how'd you spell that xD?), being in the taverns often he has picked up a way with the elvesses however he wouldn't reveal that to his family if they were still alive. 

Weakness - His fondness to ale often leads to rash decisions that high elves and alike look down on. Loosing the majority of his family during a raid of scourge on Malinor's capital city, Luminaire, during its downfall has led to him being short tempered and remarkably eager to find any survivors he may of known and so can easily be trapped/tricked. Finally he has a fear of being spotted in a tavern by someone who may know his family  as he wants to uphold his father's honour.

Give us a description of how they look?: - 

6"7 (I'm used to metric) with wide shoulders (for an elf)  ; heavy,from all the drinking, approx. 170lb; wearing a cloak and mask because of his fear to be spotted in public and also for wears dark colours for camouflage.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - The file is too big to upload... I get an error when i try to upload?

​You can use this link to look at it on website http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/3693976/redquirk-rp-skin/

sorry for any inconvenience :D

Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

[Heff 2460]

For a few reasons:

-Your skin needs to be black/grey skinned, dark elves do not have caucasian skin. Also your skin is very generic, try to find a dark elf in warrior armor or casual clothes, not with a mask and hood

-Your biography does not match up with timelines, New Malinor and Lenniel were founded around the same time, as well as both of them existing on Anthos. The worlds go in this order : Aegis, Asulon, Elysium, Kalos, Anthos, Fringe, Thales, (and Athera releases this Wednesday). If born on Anthos one could not return to any of the previous worlds, except the Fringe, which existed for a short amount of time with Anthos still being livable

-Your definitions need to be expanded on and your powergaming definition is incorrect

Please PM me for any additional details or help

[Heff 2460]

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