[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Arradon Rif Char Apply 3,0.

[astec1997 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: mylittlep0ny.

How old are you?:17.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You need to use a roleplay-friendly skin! This means a skin that illustrates your character’s appearance. Also, you must not use a skin that is obscene, offensive or not related to RP, such as a Batman skin. This is the rule i mostly agree on cause on the old server i played this was a big problem.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): When you die, either in roleplay or minecraft, you simply go back to the Cloud Temple and forget all memory of your death and the roleplay leading up to it.

This is a bit getting used to for me cause when my characters died i had to make new ones on my old server.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From a server list website.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role playing is when people act as a difrent kind of person. Like playing a role in a theater but with alot more open space to act and preform.

What is metagaming?: metagaming is knowing something OOC and use it in character.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is pushing your actions through.

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Arradon Rif.

Character’s gender: Male.

Character’s race: Mali'aheral (High Elf).

Character’s age: 225

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): When Arradon was born in Kalos, His parents were about 350 Years old when he was born. When in Kalos Arrdon alway’s wanted to explore and look around when he did his parent were with him most of the time for something he didn’t know. Till the age of 90 Arrdon had quite a normal childhood, playing, reading, When his father left at his 100th birthday Arrdon started to do the thing his father wanted from him, Training his father asked Arradon before he left to train in sword and bow combat and so Arradon started to train in the woods, At night arradon was home cooking and talking with his mother but in the day he was trading goods and training in the ussual places.

Mostly in the ussual place’s where at the Lake, where the girls allway’[s swam. Arradon couldn’t take his eye’s of the girls and mostly ended up hitting himself in the head with his training sword.

 

When Arrdon turned 104 he left to look for his father after 4 years of training, When Arradon walked on the road to Asulon. When he travled he normaly would take 3 to 4 breaks to either train or rest before heading out ones more, Arradon noticed one day that his bag was gone from

where he put it and this resulted in him wondering into the woods to find it. when he finally found the bag it was empty and the thief’s where no where to be found, after walking back to the road and walking for about 15Km Arradon stoped for a fallen tree on the road, when he tried to pass the tree Arradon got jumped by a Group of men and got pushed to the ground. When Arradon looked up he saw something he would never forget, His father was  one  the bandits, after Arradon’s capture the bandits left him for dead his father left him a small knife to escape, after Arradon finnaly escaped he went back home wich was closer then Asulon. When he got home his mother was dead in her bed from the hunger, his mother couldn’t take care of herself cause she was to afraid arradon or his father wouldn’t return. No one would take care of her cause she didn’t want it. Arradon stayed in Kalos for one more year before finnaly going to Asulon to try and Forfill his dream. Getting rich and revenge on the man who was his father. When arradon finally found his father he was about 220 years old, his father was weaker and slowler then in the past and Arradon quikly grabed for him to ask and hit the man who once left him and his mother for dead. When his father finally explained Arradon killed him and left for his Dream To get rich in Asulon, Arradon want to be rich cause is he insecure and doesn’t really know what to do  instead.  he wasnt to far from Asulon from where his father was. When he arived he turned 225.

 

 

 

 

Personality Traits: Quiet, Rude and above all a silver speaker  if the situation asks for it.

Ambitions: Getting money, he likes to get money in many difrent way’s. (trading,sword for hire, merc).

Strengths/Talents:from a young age throwing small objects made him able to throw at  an average distance. His strenght is more in his speed with a sword then being strong himself.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: His weakness is moslty in his fights against female’s his eyes are more intrested in them then the weapon they’re holding, this leads to defeat and that is something he isnt intrested in at all. Female’s are giving him a weird feeling and he simply cant ignore it. When around female’s he starts to act difrent from how he is. Water he hates water getting near it gets him angry, cause he allway’s got throw into the water by bully’s.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Arradon is lightly taned, has white hair (no facial hair), his weight is about 75KG and he’s about 1,82 meters long, he mostly wears a crimson red (duster) coat, huis eyes are darkish blue.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Skin.

http://imgur.com/843To0B

Edited October 16, 2014 by astec1997

[Readicti 902]

• Your character is far too young to have lived in Kalos. I recommend looking into the Fringe/ Thales realms for a place to have grown up.
• Elves having children, or even getting married under the age of 50 is extremely frowned upon because of the culture viewing elves under the age of 50 as children.
• Quick reference since you want to use the word mali' for elf~ Mali'aheral is the word for high elf.
• What did he train in? Why would he leave so early? Why did his father leave? Why would the bandits have kept his father for so many years (it seems to coincidental that he would happen to find the same bandits that found his dad and then the same bandits were just walking around with a body)? Why did his mom just die? Could she not take care of herself? If not- Why would he leave then? Why didn't anyone else look after her? Why would he just leave his mom?
• Your character is way to young to have been around during Asulon as well.
• It's cliche and impossible for him to take revenge on people that do not actually exist on the server.
• Ambition- why would he want money? You don't go into it other than throw it in at the end of for some reason he would be greedy.
• Weaknesses- Why would he get angry around water?
• I like that he is too distracted by women. Why would he be though? I recommend maybe even weaving this into different parts of your story or making that a big personality quirk in other parts of his character.
• If you can't get a screenshot to upload, you can upload it to photobucket or imgur and give us a link.

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