[Denied]Velix Loiro

[ndom 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? :ndom

How old are you?: 26

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Don't damage or destroy other people's buildings - this is known as griefing, and it's not something we allow. Get permission before changing someone else's building! 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): makes sense to me

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Briar_Ophiuchus told me

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: playing a role other than your actual identity, usually for games

What is metagaming?: doing stuff based on info your character doesnt know.

What is powergaming?: being a puppetmaster.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Velix Loiro

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: wood elf

Character’s age: 50

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Velix was born in Annil'sul, where his family owned an inn. Velix was a giant pyromaniac, and his dad was a terrible cook, and accidentally poisoned a high elf. They were exiled, but not before Velix accidentally burned down the inn. They moved north, to Asterwald, where they opened a new inn, this time with his mother as the cook.  His family was later captured and killed by orc slavers. Left alone in the wild, Velix became a woodsman, of sorts, chopping down trees and selling the logs for a living, as well as taking care of animals on a nearby farm. After hearing about the exile of the High Elves, Velix has decided to try moving south again, back to Haelun'or.

Personality Traits: easily distracted, shy, affectionate, easy going

Ambitions: To own an inn or smithy. or both.

Strengths/Talents: chopping trees. architecture, selling and buying product 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: social situations.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Dirty blond hair, 6'0", 193 lbs.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/S5zU042

[Overland 349]

  Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply in 24 hours with the requested changes, as seen below. 

• I would like you to expand upon all three of your definitions, as they are too short and are incorrect. You may look up the definitions, but plagiarising/copy-pasting them will result in a one month ban from applying. 
• I would also like you to expand upon your biography, it is also notable that having your parents killed by Orcs is clique, change it to something more creative.
• Please expand upon your strengths and weaknesses; selling and buying products isn't really skill, unless you're referring to bartering. 
• Your skin is too pale for a Wood Elf, and looks more like a High Elf skin. Wood Elves generally have skin of varying shades of brown.

Feel free to contact me via private message with any questions or concerns you have regarding your application or the server. I also wish you the best with being accepted next time.

 

[Overland 349]

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