[Denied]Application Submission

[TheEpicMoney 0]

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: TheEpicMoney

How old are you?: 12 years and 10 months

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: keep the server lore

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I don't have any questions

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Server lists, Youtube.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: playing a role in a game

What is metagaming?: using outside the game information. (In this case talking about things other than the server lore)

What is powergaming?: its interacting in a game to reach a goal in the best way possible

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Kiron Hallard

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 21

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): as a child Kiron allways wanted to be in the wars like his father. But when his father was struck down by the blade of an Orc he swore never to die a terrible and bloody death like his father. In result I stayed indoors more and never adventured beyond his own home town. But as the years passed by he grew to like the adventuring life. He than began to explore Anthos and the surrounding lands. He also began to write books and maps about Anthos and learn sword fighting. Kiron is not what you would call an "outgoing " person but he is still one who loves books and maps (and maybe some Mushroom stew).

Personality Traits: Quiet, some what outgoing.

Ambitions: to explore the intire realm of Anthos

Strengths/Talents: Drawing, writing

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Archery, sailing

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5 foot 11inches and weighing 100 Lbs. Kiron has brown hair, Blue eyes. He has a detirmend lookin his face

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Overland 349]

  Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

• Please expand upon all three definitions.
• I have a few concerns with your biography:
  • It is too short.
  • It contains little server lore; the wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ contains all the information you need.
  • It's cliche to have your parents/father killed by Orcs 
• Please expand upon your personality traits, strengths and, weaknesses.
• Anthos is not the current realm.
• This guide shows you how get your skin screenshot.

 

Feel free to private message me with any questions regarding your application or the server.

[Overland 349]

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