[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Roleplay Application #3

[Drumruuk 12]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: bruceparker
How old are you?: 13
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/119081-roleplay-application/?view=findpost&p=1140761 https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/120071-roleplay-application/#entry1151467

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You

will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From minecraft server list.

What is roleplaying?:  Roleplaying (RP) is acting to a specific role or character or not playing yourself as a character. If I am a Dwarf for  example I should act a certain way when roleplaying

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What is metagaming?: Metagaming is a realistic way to interact by making decisions and discussing in the roleplay about things you may know but your character in the story may not know.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is basically a un-fun way of roleplaying.
Powergaming is when you get stuck in a situation when roleplaying  and you are trying to catch someone each person makes it so you can't really win.
          A good example of this is when someone says throws stone at thief           and the thief Falls down. Thief gets up and runs. Hero jumps on thief putting him in a headlock. Thief reaches for knife. Hero hits knife out of the thief's hand Thief grabs knife and kills hero. Thats annoying and horrible role-play. No one was winning there.That is why it is always better to play right and know the rules when roleplaying.
         
In-Character Information

Character’s name: Drumruuk Starbreaker
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: Dwarf
Character’s age: 147
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Drumruuk is a dwarf from the City of Kal'Urguan. When Drumruuk was young his father was killed in the Great War in the Battle of Kal’Urguan. After his fathers death he was devastated. He became angry. From all his anger over the evil forces that killed his father he ran away from his land. He travelled through the Orcish Wall then traveled deep into the mountains in search for someone to fight by his side. But after travelling for many days going through all different lands he found no one that would fight by his side. Even the elves turned him down, they betrayed him and tried to get him killed. He soon found himself hiding in Aegis living in the caves and left alone to die. But he was found by the Starbreakers he grew stronger and found hope after a long time of none. Drumruuk will learn to find courage and even though he isn't the smartest dwarf he is determined. He has heavy thick plated iron armor with a thick brown beard and a iron cap to keep his head straight in the times when things are turned around. Drumruuk is skilled at survival after the long days he spent seeking revenge for his father. He found an old man from Athera who taught him his skills to survive in harsh conditions and dangerous environments. After long years the old man died of old age. Drumruuk never knew the mans name but he knew that he was a friend.  He has the ambition like any dwarf for others treasures and gold. But Drumruuk knows he must fight to stop evil.

Personality Traits: scottish accent, friendly, clumsy
Ambitions: Gold, treasure, axes
Strengths/Talents: fighting, strong constitution, survival,
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Running, Swimming, Fire Spells, Using Bows
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Brown hair, blue eyes, 4ft tall, 240 pounds.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):  http://imgur.com/4Lj5tAj
-Bruceparker

[Readicti 902]

• Reword your powergaming definition. All I got from it is "You can't win."
• You mention through most of your biography "the war" but never get specific. What war are you talking about?
• A warning- be careful when you say he is skilled "in many things." What is he skilled in exactly and why? How did he learn this skills? Be realistic in how long it took to learn them and how much he knows.
• Revenge as an ambition is cliche. You cannot take revenge on a dad that didn't exist for a war that doesn't exist.
• Resistant to magic- strength, magic- weakness. These contradict eachother and both do not make sense as a strength or weakness. Try to think of how his persona is a strength and weakness.,  

[Readicti 902]

Moved to Accepted Forum

[Wretched 2075]

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