[Denied]Miester999's Application

[Miester999 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:miester999

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/119600-miester999s-application/ https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/119611-miester999s-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: absolutely all of them

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I saw a video about the civil war of oren

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: roleplay means being a character in a game and acting like your in that characters position while you play like you are a Orc in game but not in real life

What is metagaming?: using your real life knowledge with your character

What is powergaming?: being invincible to anything that could happen

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Nagnuruk

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Uruk

Character’s age: 97

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): When nagnuruk was born he was raised in sanjezal when he was 12 his family moved to a nearby village it turned out that an enemy village was nearby they were a war hungry village when nagnuruk was 25 screams were coming from his village it had been raided by the village he ran and slaughtered every Orc he could find not wearing the tribe mark when he found his house it was burned to ashes and his family dead.

He went to find the war nation of krugmar North of the cloud temple of aegis when he was 45 he became a soldier of the krughai still with rage he went back to find his fathers armour he reassembled the armour and marked hit with his fathers dead hand painted white

When he was 78 he built a house in a village he lived there for a few years it was soon formed into a war camp, when large battles came between the undead and the orcs he would be on the front line aiding his higher ranks, and respected his generals and warchiefs

Personality traits: loyal, aggressive, strong, hostile

Ambitions: to avenge his father and mother

Strengths/Talents: his fathers shattered sword gives him his strengths

Weaknesses/Inabilities: his friends and him not being able to walk fast or swim well

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): he is 9ft and his weight is 120kg

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your entire application is poorly written, and hard to understand.

 

-Your powergaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your meta-gaming definition is a tad off, please try and explain the ACT of meta-gaming, maybe use an example?

 

-Your character's biography is much too short.

 

-Your character's biography uses lore from Aegis, of which was destroyed about 100 yeras ago in-character. Try to use more of the contemporary lore. (I.E Anthos, Athera)

 

-Having one's parents killed by random un-known orcs is extremely cliche, try to think of a different reason for your character's parent's random unneeded demise.

 

-How does your character's father's unmentioned sword give him strength?

 

-Having your character kill all the orcs in the vicinity seems extremely powergamey-  and is highly unlikely to be possible.

 

-You failed to include a screenshot of your minecraft skin.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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