[Denied]Tylerxthextitans Application

[TylerxThexTitan 3]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

Minecraft Account Name?: TylerxThexTitan

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13?  yes i am aware

Have you applied to this server before:  no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:    no discrimination unless IC
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?  YouTube

 

 

Definitions

 

What is role-playing?:   i think that role-playing is when you play as an character with an alternate life other than your own

What is meta-gaming?: Knowing something OOC and acting on it IC such as knowing someone hates you and then IC kill them

What is power-gaming?:  I think that power-gaming is when someone is just playing the game to reach a point in the game and that’s all they focus on

 

 

In-Character Information

 

 

Character’s name: Haley Cauthen

Character’s gender: Female

Character’s race:  Dark Elf

Character’s age:  140

 

     Biography:   Bella was put up for adoption when she was born and lived in an orphanage foremost of her childhood doing nothing but reading books. She recalls one of the books she read talking about (LORE) the tree of life and how it can speac and tells grate wisdom and another on the diamond sword. But she was later adopted by a soldier and his wife. She felt so happy when she learned she had been adopted. When she arrived at their home she was astonished it was big with vast garden, and the only reason the man adopted was because his wife could not have children. He was a nice man who’s name was Tomas he was an high his wife's name was Alana she was a wood elf. Haley loved helping with working in the gardens pulling weeds and planting flowers. She lived with this family for a long time and loved them they were old so she new she wouldn’t be with them for much longer she had spent a good twenty years here father had taught her how to use swords she remembers a story her father told her of an artifact (LORE) called the Sword Of Aestus and how its weight and sharpness and all of its stuff is based on the wielders audibility’s and that this sword could talk naturally she didn’t believe it and her mother a baker taught her how to make cookies and cake. Then one day they past away. She was given all of there stuff but she gave it all away to an orphanage because she wanted kids to git a home as she did. So that next day began to walk and walk and walk till she came to a small town named Suliseus it was a big trading city and she was taken in by a man named Valentin Don-ta who owned the towns Inn called the Ba-nor Mayor. He was also a dark elf.

          

           He raised her like she was his own child she was living a good life she had a father who loved her and would do anything for her. When she turned eighty years old she started to work for her father at the Inn she worked the front desk checking people in. She worked for about eight hours a day and was only busy for about four of those hours so on her down time she began to read books on swords and sword fighting the was one book she read it was about the (LORE) dark art and about the order of blood she did not now what most of the words were but she did not like it the pictures of men levitating blood. This made her come opposed to dark magic of any kind. Around this time she was one hundred and thirty so she figured it was time to use all the money she had made to go out into the world on her own and so she did. She had almost ten thousand minas saved up so she found a nice house but it was twelve thousand Minas so she worked for five more years and on her one hundred and thirty fifth birthday she bought the house and turned it into a sword shop and sold things like books and scrolls for learning fighting skills and she thought kids self defense classes and so after about five years of the store going strong she sold it to one of the children s fathers and she is now setting off to see the world ...

 

Personality Traits:   She is kind and doesn’t like when people yell or fight

Ambitions:  Sword fighting and cooking

Strengths/Talents:  strengths are her love for learning and how friendly and easy to relate to she is

Weaknesses/Inabilities:   Weakness are that she is very gullible and she is to trusting

Appearance:  She is gray with white hair and is wearing a dress and has blue eyes.

 

Skin:

 

[Man of Respect 5471]

Your application was DENIED for the following reasons:

• First of all, I will be issuing you two warnings for the following reasons:
  • You din't waited the 24 hours cooldown to reapply;
  • You plagiarized your powergaming application.

Refrain from such in the future, otherwise you will be banned from applying for two weeks.

• Your application includes no server lore.
• You can't start a character with any sorts of magic, these are learned through your in-game progression, such magic kinds includes:
  • Alchemy
  • Blood magic
  • Fire Evocation
•  
• English is the main form of communication on the server, your application contains several english mistakes, can you fix those?
• Bellatrix is from Harry Poter, change your name, please.
• Change your application colours, red and blue are painful to the viewer's eyes.
• Abusive adoptive parents is too cliche, can you change such, please?
• Skin doesn't fits character race.

You may reapply in 24 hours. If you re-apply within 24 hours or plagiarize again, I'll be issuing you the 2 months ban from applying. If you have any concerns, you can PM me over the forums or message me over skype. My skype is leonardomanhanialves, by the way.

[Man of Respect 5471]

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