[Denied]Application

[Mrcarrotman 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Mrcarrotman

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found it on YouTube

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: roleaying is when a group of friends act out scenarios in a fantasy world to have fun.

What is metagaming?: using knowledge to your advantage that your character doesn't know like you go talk to another player, but you don't know their name but you say it without them telling you.

What is powergaming? It is when you write something that another player can't respond to like "I pulled back my bow and shot his face clean off"

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Darfin

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Wood elf

Character’s age: 22

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

I was born a trader in cerulin in Laureh'lin working on my own without any brothers or sisters. My father was a craftsman of fine bows and sculptures and my mother worked with him as a assistant. My parents wanted another child but my mother was 526 years old. I was quite a fine trader making profit everywhere I go but I got bored doing the same thing and wanted to try something now. So I left Laureh'lin at the age of 20 to become a mercenary at

Ayrmet to become a Legate for the company of the wolf. Here I became an ok bowman and did a lot of there trading.

Personality Traits: brave, bored of doing the same thing, exited, short tempered, persuasive

Ambitions: to be one of the best bowman in Athera

Strengths/Talents: good trader, fast, can climb

Weaknesses/Inabilities: magic.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): "5,7"

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/2941361/erynor-the-wood-elf/

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your entire application is strewn with typos, and grammatical errors.

 

-Your powergaming definition is a fair bit off. As powergaming can go alot farther than simply not letting someone respond.

 

-Your character's biography is much too short.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and hard to understand.

 

-If you could, could you please define how 'exited' is a personality trait? Or is it simply an typo for 'excited'?

 

-You need to expand upon your character's strengths and weaknesses.

 

-You need to expand upon your character's appearance description.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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