[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Riv'orrar

[MTVSHBG 10]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: MysticAXM

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: If a mod gives you an answer you don't like, don't push the subject.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friends

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as if you are someone or something else.

What is metagaming?: Finding out something when out of character, and using it to your advantage while in character

What is powergaming?: Controlling things outside of your actual control through the use of emotes

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Riv'Orrar

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 196

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

    Born and raised in Leumalin, by my mother and uncle. My father was a town drunkard, who got into one-too-many fist-fights. My uncle raised me to live life as I saw fit, and to take things in stride. He cared for me, and treated me as a son. My uncle taught me to hunt, and I was horrible at it, but with no one to teach me any other trade, it was all I could do. My mother was never very intelligent, so learning leather-working from her wasn't really an option.

    I worked at hunting for a decade or so, trying to get better, and I barely seemed to be improving, but my uncle wouldn't let me give up, because when I took down my first wolf, I was so proud of myself. After that, I threw myself into hunting, and worked my hardest to improve at it. Then the Black Scourge came, and the Elves were forced to leave. When I grew to adulthood, I traveled to Aethera, and became a traveling hunter. It's a hard life, but it's better than town drunkard, I suppose.


Personality Traits: Keeps to myself, avoids conflict when possible, not one to back down from my own beliefs and choices, lives upto my mistakes, carries negative events around, and blames myself for them

Ambitions: Live my life as I see fit

Strengths/Talents: Will work towards my goals, Will survive at all costs

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not very good at anything, without forcing myself to try my hardest, rarely finds something worth trying hard for

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): White Hair, Gray Skin, Black Eyes, Black Shirt, Black Pants, Brown Quiver, Brown Gloves, Brown Boots, 6' 2", 128lbs

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/3929738/dark-elf-rogue/

[Tirenas 677]

 

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. Please feel free to contact me once you have updated your application and/or if you have questions.

 

• I'd suggest toning down on your age. You should be really be born in (provided that you're an Elf) in Anthos, the Fringe and Thales, or Athera. Asulon is pushing it.
• Having your character's father slaughtered by a pack of wolves is cliche. Furthermore, going to sleep in the wood every night and becoming super anti social is also cliche.
• Being a natural at hunting as soon as you pick it up is cliche. All skills should be learned through proper roleplay.
• Please elaborate upon your character's strengths and weaknesses.
• Your definition of metagaming is very similar to that of wikipedia and is also wrong. Please write your next definition in your own words.

[Tirenas 677]

Please wait patiently for a Global Moderator to implement you. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a message.

[Tirenas 677]

Moved to Accepted Forum

[Readicti 902]

Player Whitelisted