[Denied] Aranel's Whitelist Application

[mio1133 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? : mio1133

How old are you? : 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes I am aware.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules? : Yes I have.

What’s the rule you agree with the most? :  I agree with no trolling, and staying in character the most.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no there are not.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking for a role play server on the internet.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying? :  Roleplaying is telling a story and playing a character of your choice.

What is metagaming? : Is an action when the player uses knowledge that their character does not yet know.

What is powergaming? : Powergaming is using forced actions upon another player.

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Aranel

Character’s gender: female

Character’s race:  wood elf

Character’s age: 175

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Aranel was born to a fairly wealthy family; her mother was a farmer and her father a miner. She was an only child so spent the majority of her childhood learning how to do things by herself.   

When Aranel turned 100 her parents told her that she was adopted and her real parents had died in an ork attack. She then now understood why she was so different from her ‘parents’ with their dark brown hair and green eyes and her blonde hair and blue eyes.

Aranel wanted to go back to a place were other people would be more like her, and she wanted to learn to fight.so she left her ‘parents’ and started her way to find Laureh'lin.

She now lives just outside the borders of Laureh'lin. While living here she learnt to fight, she fells more confident with her bow, but will use her sword in times of need.

 

Personality Traits: Aranel is kind, funny, and very humble.  Also loves animals more than people.

Ambitions: she wants to do well in everything but has always dreamed of becoming the best archer.

Strengths/Talents: is very strong, can easily fend for herself, fast on her feet, has an incredibly good aim, great stamina, and good with people.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: short temper, giving credit to herself.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): light blue eyes, tan skin, blond hair, 5’6”, and 132 pounds.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):  http://i.imgur.com/9VRyhfD.png?1

 

[Lita 677]

 

A good try, but there's a couple things you need to do before you can be accepted.

 

First off, your definition of powergaming could use a little work. It's not wrong, but there's a little bit more to it than that.

 

Second, wood elves do not have blonde hair and blue eyes, that's a High Elf thing. You also cannot have had your parents killed by orcs, as it's cliched and overdone. I would advise keeping your parents alive. Atop that, you may wish to include a bit more server lore in your bio, although it's not absolutely necessary. It just reflects well upon you.

 

Third, your weaknesses do not balance out your strengths.

 

Fourth, your skin needs to be a screenshot, not the net image of it.

 

Overall, it wouldn't hurt to improve spelling and grammar a bit.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours from the time edited below. If you have anything you're confused or concerned about, just send me a PM and I'm more than happy to help.

Edited April 6, 2015 by Lita
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[Lita 677]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.