[Denied] Application

[Talkedcone621 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Talkedcone678

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/126011-application/#entry1211976

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: to not start random wars for no reason

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I saw a youtube video of it and thought it looked fun.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: its to pretend that a game and or play world you are in is the real life.

What is metagaming?: making decisions based off of the game and actions in the game.

What is powergaming?: interacting within the game to reach a certain goal.

here are the links to the wikis I used to search metagaming and powergaming to prove I put in my own words http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Powergaming http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metagaming and I didn't use a wiki for the roleplaying question I just like to rp and know what it is

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Conicus

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 45

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): When Conicus was a young lad his father was a great wizard who was not known very well across the land. His name was Konusuca he was a very friendly man who helped out his village in any way he could, but one night a scream awoke Conicus he knew that voice from any where it was his father.

Conicus ran towards his fathers room where he saw the dark ones (endermen) ripping his father apart. Conicus rand back to his room and hid is his closet. He sat in that closet for hours hearing the dark ones search through his house and smash things. After the noises stopped he left the closet and smelt smoke. He ran out of his room and for his door when he noticed that his fathers library was in flames. He turned around and ran into the library grabbing what few books weren't burning. He then ran out of the house safe from the fire. Conicus later on went to live with his uncle and aunt. His aunt taught him how to cook and his uncle taught him some basic magic. Conicus got really into magic and wanted to follow in his fathers foot steps. He started studying the books he kept studying and studying until he was almost as good as his father, but one day while Conicus was working with the dark arts he felt something hit him and every thing went black. He later awoke by the ruble of his burning village dark ones where every where. Conicus ran into the forest and kept runing until he was so tired he could no longer move. He had no home no know family and a need for revenge.

Personality Traits: has a couple screws loose, is a bit of a perv

Ambitions: revenge for his father and his village

Strengths/Talents: is good in magic and the dark arts

Weaknesses/Inabilities: is terrified of the dark ones, has weak melee damage

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): height: 5ft 6inch weight: 160 lb's

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): file:///C:/Users/John/AppData/Roaming/.minecraft/screenshots/2015-04-23_11.38.20.png

[Supah 334]

Your application has been

 

Denied

 

All three of your definitions are incorrect.

 

Your character can not begin knowing any type of magic, especially not 'dark arts' which could be considered one of the many few locked magics.

 

Your biography is very cliche, having your character's family and village being destroyed. Please come up with a more original, less overused idea for your biography.

 

Your ambition also ties in with your biography, simply wanting revenge is very cliche.

 

Your strengths are not strengths at all, more so just abilities. Abilities that your character can not have when applying.

 

Being terrified of endermen isn't much of a weakness, it's actually very common, unless it's a phobia.

 

You need to paste an actual link to your skin, not the file directory on your computer.

 

You may reapply once 24 hours have passed, please make the above changes to your application.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to send me a PM over the forums!

[Supah 334]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.