[Denied] 2Nd Attempt, Mistakes Being Fixed

[blueeyedboy03 2]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:EndersGamer0527

How old are you?:11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):Yes, once before at https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/126142-pending-server-acceptance-app/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No vulgar names

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): What if a staff is abusing and you cant argue back. How could I report this?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?A youtube video. I closed it out so I dont know the channel but I came on the second I saw it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Where you are a fictional character and act as if it is real. In a fantasy fashion. Like Minecraft LARPing

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is essentially taking knowledge you learn out of character and applying it to your in-character's knowledge as if you actually learned it.

What is powergaming?:Where you take action that kills or injures another play, but without giving them a chance to retaliate in roleplay, or declaring yourself victorious without giving them a chance to prove otherwise.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Kirito

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:16

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):He grew up with a family hiding from theives. A few adventurers came to help them. Most of them died and his family sacraficed themselves for him. He was brought to a family safe from harm in a protected enviroment. He was only a baby so he never knew.

It is his 16th birthday and his adopted family finally tells him the truth. He stole his fathers bow. (given to his "father" by an adventurer when they dropped Kirito off at thier house. Called "Heroes Calling" (not overpowered by the way) he snuck out of the house in the cover of darkness and swore revenge on the theives for what they did. He searches the 5 theives that kills his family and will stop at nothing.

Personality Traits:Likes to work alone (I know it's used alot but I like being alone), comprehends alot but knows very little. Ambitious. Idiotic (in a good way)

Ambitions:To kill the 5 Theives. To avenge everyone killed by Theives. To become an archer for royalty. To live in peace away from the theives and other dangers.

Strengths/Talents: Average Strength. Clever. Very precise archer. Knows alot about nerve points so his arrows can stun, kill, or paralyze enemies.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Uncooperative, low endurance, Kindof short, low strength, folds under pressure, shy

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Wears a mask (similar to an enderman), nimble but not the skiniest person (not fat), actual face revealed later on in the story. (but for you he has blonde hair, blue eyes, big ears.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): btw I have a mask on, if you want to see the face under it (as described in the app) then message me!

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Please choose another name as the one you've chosen is from a popular anime, along with the biography being very similar to his life within Sword art online and applying as the same age as the character in the anime.
• You can not apply to the server with a character under 18.
• Your family being killed and swearing revenge is very cliche, and I would recommend changing it.
• Your biography is very short and needs to be expanded upon.
• Your biography lacks server lore which can be found on the wiki (here). http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• How did your character become such a precise archer in such a short time?
• Add your characters screenshot to the application under appearance 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

 

Note: GM abuse can be reported with /modreq or by filling a report out on the reports section of the forums.

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.