[Denied] [Pending] Boarag Grandaxe's Whitelist Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
  
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Epickoolaid
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I like the rule about cyber bullying because I believe it will create a safer Minecraft environment for everyone to enjoy.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No. All the rules make sense.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend told me about it. His name is Mihir Jog and he has been a member since last year.
  
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
  
What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is playing a game where you must act as a character that you created from lore.
What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you use information in a game that you are not supposed to know.
What is power gaming?: Power gaming is when a player increases the skill of a character in the game in order to give that character an advantage over other players.
  
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
  
Character’s name: Boarag Grandaxe
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: Mountain Dwarf
Character’s age: 46
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

     Hello! My name is Boarag Grandaxe, and I am a Mountain Dwarf. I am 46 years old and although I am not very fast, I can be crafty and efficient. One day, I would like to be a King of the Dwarves, just as my great great grandfather King Wulfgar ruled over Kal'Arkon. I am a single child, but find it easy to make friends with others. My parents left to fight in Hiebenhall during the surprise attack to Oren, and have never returned. I have lived in Peace among friends ever since.

     I am a direct descendant of Grand King Wulfgar Grandaxe. My father used to tell me stories of how Wulfgar founded the city of Kal'Arkon in the Fringe. I carry with me my family's honor, from when the Grand King Wulfgar destroyed the slime infestation with his powerful army to his honorable declaration of war upon the outcasts of Oren and the Orcs, all the way to his resignation as he stepped down from the throne, allowing for Zahrer Irongrinder to claim the title of Lord, earning Wulfgar the title of "Restorer". I am very proud of my family's history throughout Anthos and the Fringe.

Personality Traits: I am very outgoing and talkative
Ambitions: I would like to become a leader of the Mountain dwarves one day.
Strengths/Talents: I am very good at mining and lumbering.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: I am not very fast, and therefore are usually outrun by my allies.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): I am 4 ft. 9 and 165 lbs. My eyes are green and my hair is red.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://i.imgur.com/waQhbw7.png 

 

 

[Lita 677]

Pending

 

Unfortunately, your app needs some work before you can be accepted.

 

First off, your powergaming definition is incorrect. Please refer to the RPG section of the Wikipedia entry of Powergaming, or previous Implemented applications for help, but don't copy word-for-word.

 

You have 24 hours to make these changes. When you're done, or if you have any questions, reply to the PM I've sent you and I'd be more than happy to assist.

Edited May 18, 2015 by Lita
Pending

[Lita 677]

Sorry, you never made the revisions! When you're done, you may repost the application, but make sure you wait 24 hours from now. 

Edited May 19, 2015 by Lita
Denied

[Lita 677]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.