[Denied] Jonathan Lane's Application

[Mathga 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:MathgaGaming

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Quite

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No cyber bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Word of mouth.

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?:Where players take the role of characters they've created and make their own story.

What is metagaming?:When players use information or objects they shouldn't have access to at that point.

What is powergaming?:When players overexagerate their character's ablilities.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Jonathan Lane

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:32

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Jonathan Lane is a 32 year old man who's village was burnt down by marauding orcs. Through his teen years he was trained by his father to work in a smithy and forge weapons for the militia. In his early twenties, he joined the militia himself as a footman and made several hit and run attacks on San'Vitar, thus instigating the attack on his vilage.

After the burning and raiding of his home, Jonathan found himself wandering across Athera in serch work and a home. Now, after being put on his feet by some helpful monks, he sets out to the home of his older cousin, Varian Lane, in hopes of finding a new home and being able to fortify Seahaven  against the fate his own village was subjected to.

Personality Traits:Hardy, determined, overconfident

Ambitions:To become a master blacksmith

Strengths/Talents:Decent blacksmith and weapon smith, has had combat experience

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Large ego, little education.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6"2, 153lbs

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/mUlanAO

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Expand upon all of your definitions.
• Your powergaming definition is incorrect. 
• Your biography is very short and needs more detail. Expand it about 2-3 more sentences and explain why his village was attacked as Oren and the Orcs are currently not at war.
• Expand on your characters appearance. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.