[Denied] Aragoth175's 1St Character

[aragoth175 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: aragoth175

How old are you?: 15 (16 in july)

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule where you get to choose what type of pvp you play in (Mechanical or Rp Wise)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend and I were searching for another medieval mine craft rp server and we found this one.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Getting to fill the shoes and live the life of a made up character that you've always wanted to be.

What is metagaming?:Using out of chat info in chat

What is power gaming?: Having your character be limitlessly powerful IE Bob punched Tom from 30 feet away, instantly killing him.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Aranor Oscia

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Elf -  Wood Elf

Character’s age: 148

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Aranor grew up a blind young boy who lives alone with his family, secluded in the woods. His grandpa lives about a mile away from where him and his mom and dad live. His father was always a control freak, abusing his mother and always picking on Aranor, unless Aranor's grandfather was around. Aranor was enthralled when his grandfather came about his life. Whenever they were together, they would train with the bow and quarter staff, and hand to hand combat. Years upon years have passed, Aranor growing up in this secluded lifestyle, being taught manners and lifestyles from his mom, being pummeled by his father, and being taught combat by his grandfather. Aranor was used to this lifestyle.. until one night he was awoken by his father, stumping his toe on the doorway to Aranor's room. Aranor was barely 70, when this dreadful event happened. He heard approaching footsteps, heading toward his room, while he heard his father, heavily breathing above Aranor's head. Aranor pretended to be asleep, awaiting the punishment that was about to unfold when suddenly, the approaching footsteps stopped in Aranor's doorway.. it was his mother. She screamed in terror, then a few seconds later Aranor heard two bodies hit the floor, and clinking metal across the floor. It was at this moment, that he knew that his father was going to murder him. He got up swiftly, and by muscle memory alone he ran out of his room with grace, luckily not tripping on anything. Aranor heard a loud, obviously sounding painful, scream from his mother. Aranor did not turn back, tears dripping down his blank face.. Then he felt a hand on his shoulder. For a moment, Aranor was terrified that his father caught up to him until he heard the comforting voice of his grandfather saying "Hush child.. I'm taking you to my home." Aranor still shedding tears like a water fall being carried by his grandfather..

 

It has been years since that horrifying event, but Aranor had continued his life, living with his grandfather. Not knowing where his father went.. Every morning he would wake up to training with his grandpa and the sentence "Your father will get what is coming to him.. Soon enough." Aranor is now 140, and is extremely skilled at hand to hand combat, along with using the bow staff. But the fact that he is blind still ruled him.. He thought that if he was blind, he would never come to par with his grandfather. Aranor woke up to his grandfather once more, but a miracle happened, his routine was broke. His grandfather was filled with excitement, telling Aranor that he had found someone to fix his eyes! Aranor was excited beyond belief. His grandfather had met a master healer, and had raised enough money to cure his ailment! Aranor immediately shot out of bed and went to get his eyes fixed. Once they arrived, Aranor's bare feet felt a cold stone floor for the first time. He was lead to a table on which he laid upon. And he drank a vile tasting liquid that instantly made him numb. He eventually fell asleep. Aranor woke up with bandages on his eyes. Aranor asked his grandfather if he wasn't going to be blind anymore. He responded to an unfamiliar voice saying "Yes, you are perfectly fine now. You just have to wait a few weeks before you can take the bandages off." Aranor asked where his grandfather was, and got a response that said that he will be back soon. He said that he had some business to take care of. Soon enough, his grandfather came back to get him. They continued their routine for a few more weeks until it was time to take his bandages off. Aranor took them off, and was in awe as he saw everything for the first time. But saw that his grandpa had packed a bag, that contained a boat ticket, bow staff, his grandpa's pipe, a set of his grandfather's clothing, a pouch of money, and a blindfold. His grandfather had immediately knocked Aranor out and placed him on a boat to take him away.  A few years have passed and Aranor had continued to wander about, continuing to make new friends and find new adventures. Hoping that one day he would see his grandfather again.

 

Personality Traits: He is a huge joker, always likes to smile and a huge drinker. He usually smokes a pipe all the time and when he doesn't he gets very cranky. He will always back up his friends, no matter what..if you gain his trust. He doesn't usually steal and likes to make an honest living. He'll do whatever he is told if you are his mentor. He always aims to strive and improve his strengths beyond what the normally could accomplish. He spends hours at a time training with his bow staff and fists. He will sometimes train with the sword if he feels like it. He won't practice/tolerate magic in any way, unless it is to save his own skin. 

Ambitions: He always strives to be the best, to exceed what his grandfather was. He strives to be a better warrior and trump anyone in a 1 on 1 match of strength.

Strengths/Talents: Hand to hand combat, close combat. Adept at sword-weilding. Adept at archery.  Has extremely good hearing due to the time being blind. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Cant use heavy/medium armor at all. He can't use heavy weapons very well. Usually likes to keep a bandanna/blindfold over his eyes when he travels.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Aranor is 5'8'' and weighs approximately 160 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://tbirdstephens15.imgur.com/all/  (I couldn't figure out how to add a picture onto my post, so just click the link and its the only picture there)

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your metagaming definition needs to be expanded/clarified upon.
• Your powergaming definition is incorrect.
• Your biograpgy completely lacks server lore, and or any geographical lore. Please add this by looking at the wiki, or asking me for current lore. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Expand on your characters appearance. 
• How did your character become skilled in hand-to-hand combat and with a bow (as a blind man?). Did he practice with his grandfather?
• Your skin is not publicly view-able from your imgur account, on the bottom right there should be a forums link you can replace it with on the picture. 
   

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

 

Note: Very well written biography, just add in some lore and it will be perfect!

[James 425]

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