[Denied] Application For Lord Of Minecraft

[TheDiamonJutebox 0]

The_D_crafter is my brother so we have the same Wifi IP Nickthered can vouch for me on this subject

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:TheDiamonJutebox

How old are you?:12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yes but i cant find the old application

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no cyber bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:changing of ones behaviour to assume a role either unconsciously to fill a social role  or  consciously to act out a adopted role

What is metagaming?:is making your character know something that they wouldnt know in rp

What is powergaming?:Making yourself very powerful, not allowing the other person to do anything

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Turien Terabar

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:human

Character’s age:18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  i was born in Aldersbergwhen it got destroyed by a dragon and my parents went to Werdensberg and  told me to stay in a cave and that they would return. i havent seen them since. so a pack of wolves raised me and taught me to defend myself from predators 

Personality Traits:Generous but Fierce when i need to be

Ambitions:my goal is to travel and explore  the seven skies and mainly have fun

Strengths/Talents:Swords And Bows

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Building

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):6 feet 140 pounds! :)

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/ly6oOrz

[Overland 349]

Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

• Please expand on all three of your definitions. Your role-playing defintion is also plagiarized from Wikipedia, doing so again will result in a ban from applying.
• Aldersberg was not destroyed by a dragon. Please check the wiki and add more lore (http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/) Please also expand on your biography. 
• It is cliche to have been raised by wolves. 
• Please expand on your personality traits, ambitions, strengths and weaknesses. To note: you cannot explore the Seven Skies on the server itself.

[Overland 349]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.