[Denied] Shadows Super Sweet Application

[Shadowspirit 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Shambabyrocks.

How old are you?: 17.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yep.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: "Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely."

Seems like a pretty respectful rule. :P

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, I think I've got it.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Through a friend, Domfred.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Literally the art of playing a role. Not sure if you want it more in depth, but that's the essence of it.

What is metagaming?: Using information obtained OOC, In Character.

What is powergaming?: Making your character do incredible feats that should not have been possible for that character.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Elira Faelan.

Character’s gender: Female.

Character’s race: Human.

Character’s age: 17.

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

(Before I start, I'd like to say I'm genuinely sorry if my backstory seems weird. Yes, it is 100% serious, and I hope you are not disturbed by it in any way. Thank you.)

 

Elira was born into the faelan family with her brother, Andrew. As twins, her father trained both of them from they day they could wield swords. When she was young and out of training she often spent her time roaming about the area near the cloud temple, watching idly as the travelers of all races would come in and out. Sometimes she's talk to them and learn what she could about the world out there. Elira wanted most to explore the world around her, and perhaps, one day, become a traveler herself.
 

Eventually, Elira would often explore the halfling area, as she had a strong fascination for them. Once, while conversing between some particularly nice ones, she met a very old female halfling who called herself Mrs. Twittlefoot. Mrs. Twittlefoot was a very eccentric woman, with grayish hair and long fingernails. Though quite odd, she would often invite Elira over for tea. During tea time, she'd lean quite close and sip her tea, looking longingly into Elira's young eyes. Elira found it odd, but paid no attention to it. One day, while Elira had visited the woman for tea, she took action. She leaned close, and then quickly grabbed Elira. Elira seemed confused and struggled to get free, but the old halfling clung onto her, trying to get a grip to rip off her clothes. She dug her sharp naills into Elira's abdomen, causing her to bleed. Being somewhat strong, Elira quickly went to smack the woman across the face, just enough to stun her and make her escape. It worked, and the lady fell back a bit, before trying to get up again and pursue her. By the time she did, however, Elira had ran through the door and was on her way home. After that, she never quite liked halflings.

 

Personality Traits: Though calm and collective most of the time, Elira is easily annoyed by things and can go from a good mood to a bad one relatively quickly. When in a good mood, however, Elira can be known to be altruistic and helpful, seeming to care for others more than herself.

Ambitions: Elira wishes very much to one day go exploring and see the rest of what this world has to offer.

Strengths/Talents: Elira has a remarkable talent with the sword, and found practicing with it to be one of the things she enjoys. She's also rather athletic. One of her more normal strengths include a small talent for cooking and a strong interest in art.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Elira isn't very brave and is quite easily scared. She can be easily tempted and thus is an easy target for all sorts of people intending to take advantage of her.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Elira has black hair and brown eyes. Her skin is a lighter shade and its texture seems rough in some parts from the rigorous training she has endured. She has a long scar running across her lower chest.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):
http://gyazo.com/af4417fae03c854ebafe5025dd2020fc
Sorry if the skin looks bad, it will look much better after I edit it. :)

[James 425]

 

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Expand on your roleplaying definition
• Your powergaming definition is incorrect/vague and needs to be clarified upon
• You can not apply as a character under the age of 18 when joining the server, once accepted you are free to make a new character at any age.
• Include server lore in your application, including where your character was born and stating the halfling village etc. This can be found by asking myself, another AT, or using the wiki which can be found here. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Why was your character trained with weaponry at such an early age?

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.