[Denied] Xxenderking's Whitelist Application 2

[Papa Rock 2400]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: XxEnderking

 

How old are you?: 15

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I do.

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Never .

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have.

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No not really.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?  Well I was searching for mmorpg servers and i got a video then found out about this website and read it for a bit, few hours later i signed up and mape this application.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying? taking action in a role.. 

 

What is metagaming? when on is telling people stuff about role playing that is not happening in roleplay

 

What is powergaming?: A person who learns the game he plays inside and out to become the best at the game..

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: XxEnderking

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Elf (Dark Elf)

Character’s age: 51 Years Old

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):   Kareem was only a little boy when The Evil nasty orcs tried to take him and raise him like an orc and hide what he really was. His father caught them and tore them apart from the inside, later his mother and father had casted a Dark Nature Arcane shield that covered his skin. 4 years later when Kareem was 4 years old, his parents had to send him to a school for 5 years far away called "meg'tolian the school for the special", His parents told him that he needed to go some place far from his home"Revindell" But they didn't tell him why. When he got to school Every one stared at him and called him dead species Ect, 5 years later he made friends and they started calling him XxEnderKing. It was time for him to head back to Rivendell, so he packed his stuff and headed to the train, When he entered the train and sat down he was excited, he couldn't wait to see his parents.

     

        On his way to Revindell The train stopped and all the lights turned off, He could feel a dark energy come closer and closer by the second. He could see the black smoke and the hand that opened the door, It was a dark magic orc sent to kill him. It casted the death curse on him and when the magic touched him the whole area exploded, the orc turned to ash and the shield that Kareem's parents put on him broke then he fell out of the train into the river below. It carried him 8 miles when a elf druid found him and took him to shelter, when Kareem woke up, the elf druid told him about his parents and his story, His parent hid him from the king of Laureh'lin because half blooded elf's were banned or executed. When they casted the shield on him  they had sacrificed All the power that remained in them, his mother was a human druid and his father was an dark elf that chose the good side and used arcane magic instead of dark magic, When they casted the shield It put a curse that was only known as a myth that was contained within the shield.

 

      This curse was from the end where there was a  dragon that no one dared to go near. If any one found out the person with the cures they would burn them alive, so that's why his parents sent him away for 5 years hoping that the curse would be gone when he returned to Rivendell. But sadly the curse has yet to be removed, He was still cursed with the end. The druid brought him home the town was on fire, He ran to his parents bleeding on the floor of his burning house, His father last words were "The curse is not a curse....It..Its a gift..", he closed his fathers eyes and looked over so his mother, her last words were "son we will always be in your heart, take this gem to help you to control the curse..". then she gave him a purple gem that at first touch went into to his skin to his chest and implanted its self in the right side of his chest. His skin started changing, it was turning from light coca color to black and he started getting stronger and smarter, his eyes were turning purple and he was in so much pain. A man with a bloody blue shirt and torn dark blue pants with white eyes and brown hair came up to him and punched XxEnderking, Knocking him out then taking his sword and scarring his left eye, causing his left eye to change to a whitish purple color then he went blind in his left eye. When he woke up he swore "One day i will find you and when I do, You will want to be in hell instead". 

 

 Personality Traits: Intelligent, Strong, Forgiving, Loyal, Brave, Respectful, Friendly, Faithful.

 

Ambitions: Is to avenge my parents and my home town and Find out who did this and kill them.

 

Strengths/Talents: Hunting,Archery/Arcane magic,mining,wood cutting.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Dark Magic and Evil Alchemy/ Close combat,Farming.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 

Head: No hair

Skin color: Black

Eye Color: Purple (other eyes is a light purple)

Hight: 6 feet

weight: 140 pounds  

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://gyazo.com/099d87bea5ea31828a55829889cf125c

[_Stigwig 1510]

Your application has been sadly denied for the following reasons, you need to fix them for the next time you apply:

 

- Your biography is entirely lorebreaking. There are no trains, no such place as 'Revindell'. No special schools, dragons are incredibly rare. 

 

- Your name has to be a legitimate elven name, and not your username "XxEnderKing" is unacceptable in this regard. I would advise you to look at forum threads on elven naming customs. 

 

- You cannot apply knowing magic, rectify such.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours, if you need any help with fixing the errors please send me a forum PM about it so I can help you fix them.

[_Stigwig 1510]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.