[Denied] Darkleaf Application 4

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Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Darkleaf

How old are you?:19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/128336-darkleaf-application-3/#entry1231127 https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/128255-darkleaf-application/#entry1230542   https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/128299-darkleaf-application-2/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The one that says that there are no hacks allowed

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:A friend Told me

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?:Is The Act of asuming a role of a character that they created  or a character that existed previously.

What is metagaming?:Its when a player uses knowledge of the game that  other players dont know. This gives him advantage in the game.

What is powergaming?:Is when you build a character like a god. making him powerful than other players with better traits strenghts,etc.

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name:John Paris

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:20

Biography:My name John Paris. I lived near the great lands of Gimblewood, at least before I lost my mother. I never knew my father and when I asked my mother about him, she always changed the subject. No one gave me information about my father. I was so curious about him, to the point that I went on a journey to the northen lands when I was 15 years old. I met a strange old man named Kared, he was an oracle but, when I asked about my father, he looked at me and he asked me if I really wanted to know about him. That was the worst thing I've ever did in my entire life. By the time he finished, he told me to go back to where I came from because something horrible was about to happen.

I was standing there, I saw how my mother died. There were tons of them. Just talking about it makes me sick. It was my father's army that rised back from the grave and took revenge on everyone that was standing on their path. I ran away from them, but I passed out from exhaustation. A man found me and took care of me, his name was Ternath. He taught me all the things I know. One day, we wen't hunting and we found a group of people eating in a camp. We tought they were friendly but when we went to say hello, they shot Insertenombre in the knee with a crossbow and he told me to run. I never saw him again since that day. I remembered the clan that those people were in. I'll never sleep till I get revenge on them.

Personality Traits:Intelligent,Shy

Ambitions:Find Ternath

Strengths/Talents:Good with the sword,Hawkeyed

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Light Drinker, Deep Sleeper

Appearance :http://i.imgur.com/j5VoWan.png?1

[mitto 2312]

 

As stigwig said last time, please add more depth to your last four sections, they're very bare bones.

 

Your biography lacks lore, you only mention one place.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours.

[mitto 2312]

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