[Denied] Jennaboss448 Application

[PrincessKing 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: JennaBoss448 

How old are you?: I am 14 going on 15 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No (I tried to but my computer battery died and I lost my first app.)

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the rule that villains can pretend to play a cliche role but they cannot change their name with that role like, they cant change it to Guard or Baker or Blacksmith ectra. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): The rules were fine, but what I had a problem with was finding out what the current human city's were. Maybe you could try to make the current city's for each race a little clearer so I don't accidentally put in that I live in a ancient destroyed city.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I had been googling RPG minecraft servers and this came up.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is just that, playing a role. It could be a role you create or one you agree to play as. Its like improvised acting except all the time and you can never break character. 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using information you heard OOCly or that you read on the forum or whatever to your characters advantage even though RPly your character could not have know about the info you are using to your advantage.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when you don't give the person/creature a chance to react to your emote. For example *and in one swift motion Jenna pulled her blade from its sheath and cut off Bobs head.* In that scenario I didn't give Bob a chance to defend himself or even give him a chance to duck. Hence forth PGing Bob. And no one likes a power gamer.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Bobo Badin and her split personality Coco Badin

Character’s gender: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

              Bobo was born the second youngest of five children born to a laundress and a fisherman in the Duchy of Petrus along the river in a small fishing village. Bobo and her siblings lived a happy normal life their parents loved them all very much but it was clear who was their favorite, Bobos oldest brother Kendil. On Kendils 12 bithday (Bobo was six at this time) their father decided it was time to teach Kendil the family business. Bobos mother was strongly opposed to the idea trying to convince her husband that Kendil was to young, but Bobos father would not have it. He told her not to baby the boy and promptly took him out on the river that very day. Late that night Bobos father and their brother had yet to return and Bobos mother was ringing her hands by the fireplace brow furrowed with worry when they heard a knock on the door. 

           Bobos mother opened the door and her face quickly fell with disappointment for it was not their father or Kendil but a strange grim faced man. After some pleasantries the man broke the news to their mother. The small river boat the father and Kendil had been sailing in had sunk. Kendil and their father did not know how to swim and where far away from the shore and drowned. Bobos mother screamed at him that he was a liar and to get out of the house. The man did but he was not lying. Kendil and their father had died.

         

                Bobos family without their fathers wages quickly sunk into poverty, each of the children no matter how young had to go out and work to earn their keep. Bobos mother began to drink more and more and often singled out Bobo to take out her frustrations on.  But Bobo was never mad at her mother for hurting her because she loved her so much. Bobo at the age of eight began to take up street preforming she would try to juggle and tumble but only ended up on her bum. Which for reasons that confused Bobo, made people laugh and put money in her hat. While Bobos street preformances got better her mothers cruelty got worse. She was no longer content with just beating Bobo and instead began to turn her other children against Bobo. Her influence was especially strong in the youngest boy who took up torment Bobo just like his mother at the tender age of 5. Bobos mother saw how happy street preforming made her so she forbid Bobo from doing it and from going out side all together. Her favorite punishment for Bobo was to lock her in the pitch black closet for hours and sometimes even days for fabricated offences, with little water and no food. Bobo alone and scared fabricated a friend to keep her company during those awful hours, she named her friend Coco. Her and Coco would talk and talk for hours. As the next few years went by Coco became less a child's fantasy and more and more real. Bobos worked hard to please her mother but never could. All she wanted was to see her smile.

           Coco wanted only to make Bobos wish come true. But Coco was twisted and broken she was the embodiment of Bobos trauma. Coco would do anything to make Bobo happy so one night when their mother had forgotten to lock the closet door in her drunken stupor Coco took control. She tested the door and found it unlocked then slowley pushed it open. Coco saw the mother passed out on her back in the middle of the room. She tiptoed around her to get to the fire place. In the fireplaces hot embers was the iron fire poker glowing bright red from heat. Coco picked it up oblivious to the smell of her searing skin. Bobo on the other hand was now wide awake trapped in her own mind. Bobo screamed from the pain but no sound came from her lips. Coco softly walked over to her mother, fire poker in hand and began to sear a ghoulish grin on her mothers face. Of course her mother was awakened but before she could cry out Coco lifted the fire poker above her head and thrust it into her mothers chest. Coco whispered "Now you will smile forever." and receded back into Bobos mind. Bobo horrified and scared ran away from home and spent years on the road. It took her a long while before she could even begin to use her hands properly again and they are horribly disfigured with the burn scares. But she had become a practiced and skilled performer.

         Any time Bobo is threatened or hurt Coco has the ability to take control and try to make Bobo happy in any way she sees fit. 

 

Personality Traits:

Bobo: Loud, Mentally disturbed, wild, happy, kind, extroverted, and trusting.

Coco: Protective, persistent, Broken, and angry.

Ambitions:

Bobo: To everyone in the world smile and become a famous performer.

Coco: To make Bobos dreams come true no matter the cost.

Strengths/Talents:

Bobo: Flexible, funny, good hider, juggling, dancing, and tumbling 

Coco: Cannot feel pain of the physical kind.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Bobo: Slow runner, Coco, loud, doesn't know when to stop talking, spiders, snakes, hairbrushes, mother figures, can't really hold a weapon or a pen because of the injury's on her hands. 

Coco: Bobo, can die like anyone else, hurts Bobo unknowingly. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Curly light brown hair that she covers with a colorful wig decorated with ribbons. She is 4;9 with light grey eyes and a petite figure with a weight of 102 pounds. She has curves but small breasts and she has burn scares cover booth her palms and go up to her wrist. She has fair features and is almost always smiling.

Coco: Looks just like Bobo except with a wicked grin and dead eyes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/crazy-clown-girl/

 

 

[Overland 349]

Your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

• Your biography lacks server lore; the wiki contains all the information you need, such as town names and events (http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera and http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor)
• It is overused and unrealistic to have a split personality in the manner you have mentioned, please remove it. 
• Your skin is not suitable for the server.

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