[Denied] Application 1

[Frankz50 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Frankz50

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Your character can't be royal/noble/child of a famous person, an important character, come from lands other than those in the server lore or have any form of magical qualities. If you wish to learn magic after being accepted, you may find a teacher in game.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I look up on on YouTube Minecraft roleplay server

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: acting out

What is metagaming?: it goes farther than just a game

What is powergaming?: becoming 2 games in 1

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Benjamin

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 18

Biography Benjamin on his first mining trip an accident happened were his parents died and was sent to an orphanage. And then sworn never to go mining again. instiad trained to fight. Also help  people he. But one day his village was attacked by someone unknown. He and a few others escaped. Then the town went up in flames. Now he roams the land helping people in look of a village that he can call his own. So that he can build  his house and settle down.                                                                                                    Personality Traits:  Nice and kind will fight

Ambitions: stop all evil and start a family gain people's  trust

Strengths/Talents: fighting  and gaining people's  trust

Weaknesses/Inabilities: mining

Appearance height; 5.0 weight 150 pounds  red head with beard

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):[img]imgur.com/826kh[/img]

 

[Fireheart 2777]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

I am overall hesitant to deny an application like this, but after reviewing it I can see there is a lot of work to be done. I will treat the main sections of the application as I would if I were to place it on pending. This way you can make your edits and re-apply with a sufficient application next time around.

 

Your definition of Roleplay is vague, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Metagaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, to wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

Please fill in your Weaknesses/Inabilities with more detail.

 

Please choose a skin that better fits your character.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Fireheart 2777]

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