[Denied] Application 4 By Frankz50

[Frankz50 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Frankz50

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): yes 1 time yesterday

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Your character can't be royal/noble/child of a famous person, an important character, come from lands other than those in the server lore or have any form of magical qualities. If you wish to learn magic after being accepted, you may find a teacher in game.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I look up on on YouTube Minecraft role play server

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is role playing?:  being  someone else through acting

What is meta gaming?: being realistic  example not knowing things that you would outside the game   

What is power gaming?: cause and effect or not getting time to think example a guy killed a man 3 years later he woke up in a sell     

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Benjamin Maze

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: Mountain dwarf  

Character’s age: 34

Biography

 

Benjamin Maze was born in Athera 16 years before they had to leave . Benjamin's early childhood was simple get up go to school come home go to bed. but one day changed his life for ever. When Benjamin turned 13 his parents thought he was of age to go mining little did he know that A landslide would  kill his parents and others.  Benjamin was the only one to escape.  The authorities found him wandering in the streets, so he was sent to an orphanage . Benjamin fell in love with mining even though it killed his parents.  He wanted to be in the caves all the time. but then he broke his leg when he fell . the doctor told him to stay out of the mine for 3 months after he healed up .  That's when he found fighting .  After Benjamin found fighting  he was never in the mines during the day.  He only slept 3 hours a day . One night Benjamin was in the mines and the ground started shaking and the mine started to split , and out came a nasty worm , That was huge and  it was headed for the top. Benjamin did not know what to do other than get to the top . That is all he thought over and over again get to the top, then the ground started to split he jumped upon the stairs and ran as fast as he could . Halfway way up he tripped and  there laid two twin babies that fell down the cracks. He checked  the  first baby to see if he was alive no breath. Then he checked the second the see if the 2nd baby was alive . There was a breath  just one ,  but that was good enough. then the mine started to cave in.  He got up and sprinted up , 3 steps way he fell and dropped the baby. A giant boulder fell and took the babys leg off  , He grabbed the baby remains  and ran out to the docks he took the baby to the medic where he left the baby. To This day Benjamin does not who the baby is died or if the baby is alive. It was a sad day when Benjamin moved because of the gigantic worms When Benjamin Moved to Vailor it didn't feel like home to him. Benjamin was mad and sad because of what happened , So he said to him self " until Vailor feels like home ill roam the lands and  help people. He now roams the land and visits Vailor ever so often. Benjamin doesn't know all that he wants but  he does know  that he wants to help people and find a home for him. Now Benjamin helps people when ever and wherever  he can and wants to soon settle down and stay someplace that feels like home. 

 

 Personality Traits:  Nice and kind loves to help  

Ambitions: stop all evil and start a family gain people's,  trust make sure people are safe  

Strengths/Talents: fighting, mining,  gaining people's  trust and stubborn

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  slow talker,  is slow, rude and depressed 

Appearance height; 5.0 weight 150 pounds  red head with beard

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/553696/digy-dwarf/

[mitto 2312]

I apologise but you're application has been denied. I have deemed it of too low quality to be accepted. I do not feel you would be able to handle the level of quality that we keep as a standard here on lotc.

 

As I stated before you need to fix your grammar and spelling. You will need to show a good understanding in order to be accepted.

 

Please make an acceptable application in terms of language. As it stands it's near impossible to read.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.