[Denied] Ryan's Application

[Hopper2060 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Hopper2060

 

How old are you?:14

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: war rules

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? minecraft server list

 

Definitions

 

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: the act of playing a role as character rather than yourself

 

What is metagaming?: discussing topics your character would realisticlyhve no way of knowing 

 

What is powergaming?: declaring an action is sucessful without giving the other player freedom to act on his own

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: ryan hopper

 

Character’s gender: male

 

Character’s race: human

 

Character’s age: 256: looks 30

 

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): i am the son of a warrior guarding a deep dwarf mine. the mine was over run by a plague destroying the villlage the mine and my family. i then roamed for years alone from village to village scavaging for food and suplies until i reached the age of 18 and became a mercinary and roamed protecting nobles and loot transporting from castle to castle. 

As i progressed throught my work i came to work for a mage. i was to protect one of his wives while he left for a year. his wife martha who i was to protect was the most beautiful woman ive ever seen. and as the mage was gone we fll in love like a fairytales by grimm. but the mage returned and found out. he told me to take her and never return. me and martha lived for years in the woods but i noticed as she grew old i stayed the same. she later died at the age of 52. i then searched for the mage just to find he had died. i searched his journals to find he had cursed me to livr forever without her. i ran to his pit of lava and jumped in hoping to die. but i woke up the next die with not a single burn. i searched mage after mage, year after year for a cure but to no sucess.

then i found out of the Athiea full over magic and mystery. i sold every thing for a ship to take me. i hope it kills me.

 

Personality Traits:quiet, fighter,calm,adventurer,self-disciplined, smart

 

Ambitions: to die

 

Strengths/Talents: fighting thinking planning mining

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: love building farming

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): white but tanned, eyes are brown, black hair,5ft 10in 168 lbs. scar from poisoned blade on back, and knife wound from an assassin who tried to kill a noble.

 

(i got it from vortex)skin:http://i738.photobucket.com/albu

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Your definition of Roleplay is vague, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Metagaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, to wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

Please provide a picture of your Character’s skin so I can review it.

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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