[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Hopper2060 App 3

[Hopper2060 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: hopper2060
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/user/75719-hopper2060/
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: all of them
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? minecraft sever list

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
What is roleplaying?: acting as a character would rather than yourself
What is metagaming?:discussing topics based on info your character would have no way of knowing
What is powergaming?:a player presumes their action against another player is sucessful without letting the other player react

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
Character’s name: james hopper (picked by fellow mercinariers
Character’s gender: male
Character’s race: human
Character’s age: 25
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
James was born in 1495 showing close resemplence to a highlander where he began as an orphan under the Reformed Kingdom of Oren in Athera. He was later taken in by a band of mercenaries. He was taught in combat, reading/writing, math, and languages(almost got blah). He was great at archery and fighting as a team but lacked fighting one on one. He worked with a blacksmith to make his sword due to the idea that the warrior can not blame flaws in the sword becuase any flaws in the balde were made by himself. If any flaw was made he was to melt it down and restart. He was also trained to use his surronding to any advantage in preperation or in combat.  James thought after all of his training he was ready but during the orc-dwarf war being only 18 and a virgin he was not allowed to fight fearing of his mind wouldn't be clear enough in battle. He was forced to stay back and sharpen the blades and craft arrows for battle.
soon after the giant worm attacked athera the group feld along with the others torward the isles of vailor. the group did small guarding jobs until 1518 when the "the Duke's war" broke out. the mercinariers joined with the Ducal coalition who payed a good price for thier loyalty. the mercinariers first fought in the Battle of the Forest. they stood in the forest side by side ready for death its self to come save them. they raised their shield as the volley rained down dropping men left and right. a few of their fell to adding to the piles of bodies. james could see the shine of the enemy's iron suits. as the volley ended the soldiers with them bagan to beat their shields with their asortment of weapons. james himself took his axe and bashed onto his braod iron shield. now the enemy was on top of then with fury of defeat the army of adrian fought till the end. James slashed the enemy one after another but he looked around noticing many of his group had fallen motionless to the ground. James looked around but suddenly the shield of a soldier slammed into his face twisting him around knocking him to the ground face first unconscious. He awoke dazed and confused and covered in blood ,his nose felt broken and his eye bruised. The dead of both armies lay around him. The lights of lanterns moved in the darkness. James knew they were the army of Oren looking for fellow comrades and prisoners. James couldn't take the risk he ran for the hills holding his axe retreating into the shadows of the woods. With no friends or food James hoped someone would take him in.

Personality Traits: thin skin, stubborn, cautious

Ambitions: find somewhere to stay and build a life as a private mercinary

Strengths/Talents: combat, blacksmith, mining

Weaknesses/Inabilities: fears heights, fighting alone, unsocial but fears to be alone, always looks to fight

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5ft 9in 175lbs, tanned skin, black hair, whip mark from master during training, scar from knife in thigh from being attacked by pirates on the voyage to vailor, broken nose, black eye, arrow in shoulder balde( he dosent know yet)
 
skin:http://i738.photobucket.com/albums/xx25/ryansharper2001/2015-08-13_18.34.52_zpsyzsiy5di.png

[Mephistophelian 977]

This Application is put on:

For the following reason(s):

-Your grammar is poor. Fix it.

-Your weaknesses do not balance out your strengths (Hint: Add more or develop your current ones further).

You have 24 hours to make the change.

If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

Accepted! I will be Mentoring you soon :)

[Mephistophelian 977]

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[Slic3man 484]

Player Whitelisted.