[Denied] Darkcry23's/xar's Application

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Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:DarkCry23

How old are you?:18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No Abusing Glitches

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No, all rules are fine.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend told me, his IGN was gamer9726 before he changed it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you make up a character and play with the character as if it was real life. Not just with minecraft but other games too. When you play with friends in real life with made up characters that is also roleplaying.

What is metagaming?:Meta-gaming is when you know something out of character but somehow make your character know it in character.

What is powergaming?: When your character is just too OP and too powerful.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Xar

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:Wood Elf

Character’s age:100

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Xar was born in the Forest Of The Wood Elves. He was no rich wood elven family, he was not rich but, very poor. He never went to school so when he was 80 years old he went to be in the Army. He stayed there for about four years and he went back home to his parents. His parents were both wood elves. His dad was a warrior before his retirement and his mother was a healer. His father taught him the ways of the Bow And Arrow, and his mother watched Xar grow as a man. Xar soon became much more powerful than his father and looked down on him. Because of this Xar's father grew jealous of hisown sun. One day Xar's father got sick of being weaker than the one he trained. Xar's father, to show his strength, eliminated Xar's entire family except for Xar and his father. Xar came home and could not even speak. He came at his father with all his might and killed his own father, stabbing him in the neck.

 

Xar having no family left but himself, continued training as a warrior. He met different people in the world and saw that the world was cruel. He became obsessed with seeing people tortured and people dying. Xar believes that everyone is cruel but himself and vowed to make everyone feel pain. He grew very violent and sadistic over the years and now is trying to learn magic as well to make people suffer. He wants every person except for him to suffer like he had watching his family perish. He wants every person, not to die but to suffer. He enjoys torture , not death. He now tries to find ways to torture people and then kill them. This is how Xar came to be.

 

 

Personality Traits:Mean, Harsh, Violent, sadistic, and cold blooded.

Ambitions:Make people suffer, and make people watch loved ones die.

Strengths/Talents:Deadly with a bow, not a bad swordsman, physically strong.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Not very fast, he has a bad knee, and Xar has anger issues.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Xar is light skinned with long pointy ears. He is standing 6'11. He is 218 lbs. He has skinny medium length lips and bluish eyes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://minecraft-skin-viewer.com/player/DarkCry23?r=1

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your powergaming definition is incorrect.

 

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming definition.

 

-Your entire application is incoherent, strewn with typos and errors, and poorly written.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and is hard to understand.

 

-Your character's biography makes little to no sense. He... what did he do for 80 years? And... in 4 years of the military he didnt learn any fighting skills, but with his father he somehow learnt plenty?

 

-Having a character have his family randomly killed by another family member, than become an evil mastermind is quite cliche. 

 

-6'11 is far too tall for a wood elf.

 

-Your skin is not suitable for a wood elf. Wood elves are darkskinned.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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