[Denied] My Application

[awesomefun21 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: awsomefun12

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes I am aware this server is PG-13.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The villan rule for, no stealing from locked chests.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I looked for roleplay servers and I found this one.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Having a role and a character and to be IC alot.

What is metagaming?: Using knowledge your character doesnt have

What is powergaming?: To build a character to be best at one thing.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Claire Garver

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

     When Claire was only 2 years old dwarves from Urguan attacked her city. Her parents were killed. She was raised by her brother. But when her brother went to war to end the dwarven and human war. He was killed. Claire was 16 then.

 

   When she was 18 she set out to make a place her home, she was then lost till she was found in elven land when she was 20. She set off at 21 years old to kill all the dwarves of Urguan and exact revenge for her family. She will not rest till she kills and steals everything those dwarves love. (she is a villan btw)

Personality Traits: Evil, Vengeful, Wicked, Nice (rarely, when she's in a "good" mood), cute.

Ambitions: Ending the dwarves one by one.

Strengths/Talents: Very stealhty, Quiet, Flexible

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Very easily bribed, Not a good fighter

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 5 feet, weight: 198 ILB's

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): I can't use the extension but my skin is a girl with red eyes in a black dress.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

-All your definitions for Roleplay terms are incorrect.

-Your character's biography is far too short.

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and makes little sense.

-Your characters's biography includes barely any server lore.

-You dont explain in your character's biography how they got their skills.

-Your character's personality contradicts itself.

-You failed to show a minecraft skin for your character. The tutorial for how to do so is literally in the application. Click the underlined 'here' in the application.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

Edited September 1, 2015 by Quavinir_Tinuvial

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.