[Denied] Snikfang

[Snikfang 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:thejaster
How old are you?:15
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no metagaming
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):none
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?friends
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
What is roleplaying?:playing a role in a story 
What is metagaming?: using out of life info to your advantage
What is powergaming?: not give people enough time to react
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
Character’s name:Snikfang
Character’s sex:Male
Character’s race:Ogol
Character’s age:27
Biography: My name is Snikfang when I was a young cub In the clan gorkil my father was murdered and my mother had to raise me by her self. I was a only child but I was in trials all the Time ex. When I was hunting when I was young an I got lost in the woods and had to find food, water and shelter by my self I was 5 then and I finally found my way back home to my mother when I was 12 my mother died and I had to be strong because I just had reached man hood and had to kill prisoners that my clan had capture there was a dark elf and one dwarf that was ruthless and had a heart of stone I had to kill to stay alive at this time I was still mourning over my mother death I turned that sadness in to rage and reaped them in to pieces and I was brought in to man hood and I love kill thing so much and need to go on ever raid and plunder because I was a savage but one raid was deferent because I got lost from my clan and my friend in war and I search for days but I finally gave up on the search and found out siders and now we are a clan and we watch each others back and our own backs at the same time it was like we all become brothers there was a wood elf dwarf and orc and me.When I was 15 we moved from Athera to Vailor then the real journey started.Then the  dwarven civil war started but end quickly.
Personality Traits:outgoing,funny,laidback
Ambitions:to watch my clans back and try to stay alive
Strengths/Talents:I am a good cook even now I'm an ogre,strong, great fighter
Weaknesses/Inabilities:I am to caring and trust the wrong people. Oddly I love the taste of blood
Appearance: I am 9ft9in talk and I am very strong and I am green and hairy and try to be smart
Appearance:http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/4165582/orc-warrior-improvement/

 

Edited September 18, 2015 by Snikfang
pending

[Fireheart 2777]

 

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

Your definition of Metagaming is vague, please refer to the link here for guidance.

Your definition of Powergaming is vague, please expand on it by referring to this link here for guidance.

Please fill in your Character’s Race correctly

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Fireheart 2777]

 

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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