[Denied] Krytonya007's Application

[Remyy 952]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Krytonya007

How old are you?: 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: if your a villain don't be too op for the purposes of rp.  

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? YouTube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:  Acting for fun or as a job, theater, etc

What is metagaming?: things from real life

What is powergaming?:  Making a non killable character

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Characters name: Karen Stratine

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Halve Breed (human and elf)

Character’s age:21

  My name is Karen Stratine , I'm 21 years old I grew up south of Ker'nor.  I am a Adunias my father is was a dark elf and my mother is a human heartlander. I have one younger sister Zelda, her ears are much smaller and normaly not noticed.(Zelda is GamerGal27Xs not registerd yet) We have our differences she hates meat and loves studing animals, she loves magic hate seeing others abuse it, Me on the other hand I am a hunter I observe and kill, meat is my main food source I too love magic but I use it to my advantage, or known as pranks. Me and my sister have a troubled past, our father was killed in a By a group of bandits, called the Zanizas raided our homestead. He taught me many things about combat, Like the bow and arrow and sword.  My mother died three years after my father, But before she died she taught me how to use a slight amount of magic and how to cook and sew. I was only 10 when my dad died, and 13 when my mom passed. I worked long hard hours as a farmer to take care of my sister. When I turned 16  we became travelers, until last year We separated I haven't seen her since. Our family history is long, we keep most of our fmilies diarys to know what it was like, My grandma, Loreana Stratine was a teennager when the dark elfs broke off for there own, her and her family were dark elves so they moved with  the others, another good one is from my uncle Chris journal we call him uncle but he is really old and and dead, he was a human and he participted in the great war with lasted from 1336-1339.  I read there diarys when i get deppresed of discouraged, to see how my family overcome there goals. My goal in life is too find my sister and kill the group who took my father, I don't care who or what gets in my way. Earlier that year I went up and fought the Zanizas, they grew in numbers and she was easily over powered and was knocked out, this caused amnesia for about a year.   

   (future)    After killing the humans who took her father, she relised what she did was wrong, and she started searching for her sister. After months of search she found her. Karens rage slowly went away and she became bounty hunter. She started cooking and sewing more often to ease her regrets.  Since she lost her rage she devolped ansomnia, and she started passing more frequently out, she also made new friends who like her for her and they wont share her secret ( of murdering.) She opend a restaurant  called stratines. Karen gets into a lot of trouble, as she tries to find were she belongs in this world, she is a avenger and she is proud of it.

Personality: Strong, Hardworking,(sometimes)heartless , Shy, Kind sometimes

Ambitions: Kill the group who killed her father,find her sister reach the top with her restaurant

Strengths/Talents: Sword ,hunting ,bow, cooking and sewing

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Trust issues, Ansomnia, and frequently passes out.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): she is 5 foot 3 110 lbs of pure muscle, purple hair pink eyes

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin    Thank you for your time!.

 I hope my answers are compatible.

Edited September 20, 2015 by Krytonya007
my pending request!

[Fireheart 2777]

 

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

Your definition of Metagaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

Please choose a skin that better fits your character.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

 

Please go through your application and ensure that all grammar and punctuation is correct to the best of your ability.

[Fireheart 2777]

 

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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