[Denied] Masterpr01 White list app

[Masterpr01 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Masterpr01

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):no but ı learned it righr know

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:the rule about using glitch

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?from a friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Roleplaying is making desicions with your character in your own story. This desicions happens in a world with tons of rules. Your character takes a long way in this story. Roleplaying is this for me. If you want a dictionary explanation, Roleplaying is like a theatre.

What is metagaming?: When you use an out of game knowlodge in your character, it's calling by Metagaming. Example: Saying someone's IC name.

What is powergaming?:  If your character makes bigger and impossible things then his own power, it enters Powergameing rules. Also, Powergaming can be called to unlogical happenings.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Harthol

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age: 27-28

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Harthol is a sreet urchin he is groved up in streets.He believes every person must have a life goal.  His life goal is having a better life. After  12 years of street life meets a guy named darius lightsword. Darius was kicked from home by his father. Darius offered a better life to harthol.3 years later they left the city.One day they lost in forest.few days later they founded by the monks of the cloud temple and they started to live in there.He groves in the temple but he have a urchin in inside this kid wants to a better life and later a man named  glaber comes to temple and started to live in there.A year later harthol darius and glaber becomed best friends they all have same ideals.One day they left the temple and they adventure started

Personality Traits: Suspicious, brave , survivalist , Rude

Ambitions:I'm going to prove that I'm worthy of a better life.

Strengths/Talents:Stealth , Sleight of hand , Using sword , athletics , Strong

Weaknesses/Inabilities: communication ,  quarrelsome , hates nobles , bad at social skills , Easily becomes angry ,

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height:5 feet-weight:200 pounds-He is handsome but ragged Wears old shirts and pants and his old boots.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://orig09.deviantart.net/c6c0/f/2012/361/d/2/d2b79e2432740352698d1998698a640e-d5pcixw.jpg

[mitto 2312]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

(1)

Please improve on the overall grammar and presentation of your piece. It's very clustered and everywhere. Show a higher level of literacy please.

(2)

Please expand on your biography, include other things

(3)

Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

Check out our wiki!

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

(4)

Your strengths and weaknesses are unbalanced, please make sure your character isn't overpowered!

(5)

Please add a skin to this application.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.