[Denied] application

[Henessey 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:HenesseyHd

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Combat killing

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking for a good rpg server.

What is roleplaying?:the acting out or performance of a particular role, either consciously (as a technique in psychotherapy or training) or unconsciously, in accordance with the perceived expectations of society with regard to a person's behavior in a particular context.

What is Metagaming: Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game. Another definition refers to the game universe outside of the game itself.

1. What is Powergaming: Powergaming (or power gaming) is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games, with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelling.

Charcter’s name: Henessey Robertson

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:human

Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): When I was five I stared as I saw my parents slayed before me. The man's face was covered and in a split second he was gone like a shadow at night. I knew they were gone, but it still horrified me to look at them. I ran to my uncles hounse in the middle of the night only to see my uncle's head at the doorstep. I swore that night that I would find this man....and kill him. 18 years later i am still looking for him, after that night I started to train myself to be able to defeat him. 

Personality Traits: smart, brave, courageous, giving

Ambitions: revenge, helping others

Strengths/Talents:swords skills, strength, archery, knowledge of ancient beings. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: memories of family

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight) scared face H: 6:4, W: 230 lbs.

 

[tilly 5115]

Hello, applicant, you've been denied for the following reasons:

• You have plagiarized/copied word-for-word the definitions of roleplaying/metagaming/powergaming! This is your first warning.
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.

• You have failed to attach a skin! If you need help with getting a screenshot, follow this guide.

• When writing your character's biography, please refrain from using the cliche of 'my parents were killed and now I am orphaned'.

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

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