[Denied] [Pending] Application

[ShadowAnakin 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ShadowAnakin

How old are you?:19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no bulling and being mean to people

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? my friend superAawsome 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when a player who can make or be a certain charater or have a job and must act as if he was that person examples Gmod roleplay severs and Lord of Craft

What is metagaming?:It's an out of character action where like they use information they are not supposed to know.

What is powergaming?:Is when a player makes a move on a enemy player with a one hit move not allowing the other player to make a move and basically ruins the mood of the battle and fail rp.

 

Character’s name: Anakin

Character’s sex: Mela

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 19

Biography: Anakin was a Teen who lived in the land of Aegis in the Most populated of humans Petrus. Anakin didn't live the good life like every other boy and girl who lived in Petrus his Mom had just die of a heart attack and his father left them.Anakin was living a bad place until a man by the name Sam brought him in to his clan of Mage's who dwell the sewers Anakin wanted to be like the Mage but he wasn't much of a stealth person he always would like to be tough and fun but when the Petrus Guards had found there hideout they ran looking for a exit. Sam had given Anakin a Book he told him to run and find a man by the name of scot.and soon after sam was arrested he said his goodbyes to the one person he grew closer to. After Anakin got Away And he was curious and open the book and after that Anakin Lost his Right eye. And Anakin Right Eye gives magic powers form the book.After reading and studying the book he had been given he would soon desire to find new and unknown creatures and plants to add on to the book and become a master mage. But he wasn't wealthy and he needed minas so he went on to look for a man who goes by the name of Lucas.And from that point on he was on a quest to be a Superior Mage. 

 

 Personality Traits: He is very cofindent to talk to females and he one day would like to have a family when he has done his journey.

Ambitions:Fill the book of records of new plants & creatures and help people with there problem.

 

Strengths/Talents:He can fight with any combat style sword ,Axer, arrow you name it but is very good at magic.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Anakin can perform any magic and also he can hold his breath for long,and he is very weak to fire

 

Appearance:He is 6' 2" tall and his eyes are blue black and hair black heres a link http://imgur.com/a/v8621

 

Thanks for reading my 1th try of application i really hope i get accepted i really wanna roleplay it has been a side dream to do so in a minecraft sever.

Edited September 20, 2015 by ShadowAnakin
fixing the probloms

[Lvke 1000]

-You plagarised most of your application from this one.

-Your additions to what you didn't steal are even worse, and completely disregard server lore. One cannot be an extremely talented mage and so good at combat due to the way magic works on this server.

-Special abilities such as the eye, which is clearly intended to make your character seem cooler or more bad arse than the one in the app you stole, are also not in line with the sort of character we normally see on the server, nor that we or the lore allow.

Due to the sheer amount you have plagiarised, I am following a previously set precedent and banning you from applying for a month.

 

Edited September 21, 2015 by Lvke

[Lvke 1000]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.