[Denied] [Pending] Adamo010o application

[Adamo010o 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Adamo010o

How old are you?:18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:I have 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No powergaming/metagaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?google

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:is taking the identity of a chosen character and acting on there behalf in all that may face you.

What is metagaming?:is getting information  that you know ooc but your character doesn't in rp and using it to your advantage 

What is powergaming?:is forcing the flow of rp by saying things such as *and i kill him with my blow*

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Eddard Alden

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:elf (wood elf)

Character’s age:150

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Eddard is a simple ranger of the north he with his band of rangers patrol around the edges of the of his near by village  .He is always with his long life friend Brandon,who Eddard has grow to love and admire.All was well for Eddard he was a simple man who never thought about life too much and chose a life of solitude.However,all that changed for him at the age of 90 he and his follow rangers were attacked by a group of orces.they were out numbered and suffered great losses including Brandon.

 

     Eddard escaped with his life and ran for days to lose the orcs,one he did lose them the pain of all those he lost started to way on him.He took a long journey to a near by elven village,He seeked the elves thinking that they had the help he needed to get throw his pain.He was welcomed to there homeland and maid many friends there as the days gone by he felt he found his place all the elves were pure or so he thought.He mastered archery even better than before his long years as one of the elves he was blessed with along life although he was by no means  loyalty he only descended form a line of rangers.He left the village with a  bow that was a gift to him and he now wonders the lands not certain of whats a head.     

Personality Traits:Loyalty,enjoys solitude   

Ambitions:To travel around all of the lands seeking adventure and knowledge 

Strengths/Talents: Archery,and basic survival skills that you might find in a ranger of the wood elves.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Doesnt usually wear heavy armor unless needed,he isnt good with horses, we loves nature and is generally agains large citys. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):he is tall at 187cm he is slim and fast on his feet.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/5219219/legolas-greenleaf/

 

Edited October 3, 2015 by Adamo010o

[AGP 3169]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

-Please fill in your Weaknesses/Inabilities with more detail.

-Also, it seem that you believe this server to be a Lord of the Rings Roleplaying server. Despite our name being 'Lord of the Craft,' we are not related to Lord of the Rings in any way. The server is not a Lord of the Rings server, and thus your biography will not fit. I therefore ask you to write a new biography that adheres to our lore. You can find our server lore on the forums or on the wiki, which can be found here. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

-Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

-Please go through your application and ensure that all grammar and punctuation is correct.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

-Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above. 

[AGP 3169]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.