[Denied] Lord Of the Craft Application

[StarrGazer555 20]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? My Minecraft account name is StarrGazer555 . I put this in as my name because my actual last name is Starr. I think that it is pretty fitting.

How old are you?: I am 12 years old.

Are you aware the server is PG-13? Yes, I am fully aware. I am only one year under the age limit. I do feel though that I am mature enough to play and will act older. ( I do have a guardians approval)

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes ,  I have. I believe that they are well thought about and make sense.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with one of the war rules which states that you must have a reason to go to war. This makes server rivalry more story-like and immersive.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out about this awesome server over looking it up on Google. I then watched a video over the basic story line on the lotc YouTube channel.

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is a way to let players almost dive into the game or, in this case, a server. First you build or create a character and act like him. The other way is to become a already made character and then suit his personality.

What is metagaming?: metagaming is using knowledge of the game you are playing or other games to help yourself. This is like the literature term illusion. It means to relate to another book.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is to do everything in your power to accomplish a goal set inside a game.

Character’s name: My character's name is David Featherton. My stage or knight name is StarrGazer . This is also seen as my minecraft username StarrGazer555.

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human highlander

Character’s age: 15 years old

Biography:                                                 My name is David Featherton . I was raised inside dwarven territory of which I dont remember. I was only a child then. We where a farming family that raised cattle for nearby dwarf civilizations. It was all fine until the ogres destroyed my home. I Saw the murderers destroy my family one by one as I hid. I will never forgive myself for letting them die. After they did this I wondered the lands trying to find work. Everyday I daydream of my dreadful past. I know wonder and seek a sweet revenge.

I will now try to seek aid of nations who also despise the filthy orcs. I will also find the best weapons that will help me land terror in the eyes of the orcs. I will become the most powerful human of my time. I will drink the blood of the orc nation.

Personality Traits: I am a traveler who takes insults from not one being. I am independent and only seek friendships of those who follow. 

Ambitions:To destroy and kill all orcs.

Strengths/Talents: Persuading all nations

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Finding peace in work or finding a job

Appearance: I am a man who is within a shell of armor. If one was to ever set eye on my body they would see shorl Blonde hair. I am 6 feet tall with a straight face. I show little emotion and have giant feet. My hands are covered with calluses. I have a scar on my left eye.

 

[mitto 2312]

under review

[mitto 2312]

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

(1)

Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please correct them using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

 

(2)

Seeking revenge on Orcs as a ambition is a very common cliché, please base your character around something more unique.

 

(3)

Please lengthen your biography, the points below followed by a letter shall help you achieve this.

 

(3a)

Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

Check out our wiki!

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

(3b)

Please include more important events in your characters life which have moulded them to be who they are today. Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age. Explain your character in detail.

 

(4)

Your personality traits do not make sense, think of something more like; Courageous, Funny, Narcissistic, etc.

 

(5)

Your strengths and weaknesses are severely unbalanced, persuading all nations doesn't really make sense and seem a bit over-powered anyway. Thing of something like; 'Is well built so is naturally stronger.' As for weaknesses; 'Was never taught how to swim so struggles in the water.'

 

(6)

Please add a skin to your application, this short guide should help:

• Go to: http://minecraft.novaskin.me/#
• On the far left of the screen there's a button that says 'Open' Click that and select your characters skin.
• Once you've successfully opened your characters skin on the top bar there should be a similar green button that says 'Photo'
• Hit photo and it should show you a 3D model of your skin. Once it's come up and you're happy save the image of the skin to your computer.
• Next, go to; http://imgur.com/ trusted image sharing site.
• On the top hit the 'Upload Images', then hit browse computer and select the 3D model of your skin that you saved.
• Once you've successfully loaded the image, hit 'Start Upload' and after a bit it should send you to a page with that image.
• Simple copy the URL link and put it on the application.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.